A ‘spot’ is like, a… place wherein you reserve your place for commenting? Um, I can’t really explain it. People usually put ‘spot’ so they can come back for it and comment again without having to be the last person to comment. In my case I was the first, so yay! ^^ I’m sorry it’s unclear (I was never good at explaining things), but the more you write and read fics, the more you understand the ‘spot’. Um, anyway, sorry for commenting on the fic so late; but are you sure this is your first? Because it was written well :) It’s sad, but it’s true and… well, I just liked it :D LOL I guess I’ll just google translate the prayer XD Congrats on your first fic! :)
Oh! I get it now :P (It's kinda pathetic because it's been years (like... almost 8 or something) that I'm on lj and didn't know that <.<' I'm glad I managed to pull off something good for my first Yunjae fic :) Thank you for reading ♥
This was unexpectedly raw and beautiful to me. From the way you describe Jaejoong's emotions, his perception of not only what he sees but also what fandom is seeing- it makes it real. Thank you for writing such a beautiful piece dear, I haven't read good short angst oneshots in forever and this- this is just ♥
Thank you. I'm not sure if I explained it correctly but basically, the first part is Jaejoong dreaming about some sort of 'what if' he hadn't left the group with Yoochun and Junsu. Also, some incounscious part of him (in the dream) want to bring on the there is distance between him and Yunho (also with memory but like you know, our dream are trying to talk to us... so it's like the dream wants Jaejoong to confront it. I know it's complicated but well...)
As for everything that is (), that's Jaejoong's concious mind remembering things, so it's like he remembers more and more as the dreams goes on to finally remember completely at the end. Then he wakes up and we understand what he means by the 'please just-'
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Thanks for reading :)
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Um, anyway, sorry for commenting on the fic so late; but are you sure this is your first? Because it was written well :) It’s sad, but it’s true and… well, I just liked it :D LOL I guess I’ll just google translate the prayer XD
Congrats on your first fic! :)
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I'm glad I managed to pull off something good for my first Yunjae fic :)
Thank you for reading ♥
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From the way you describe Jaejoong's emotions, his perception of not only what he sees but also what fandom is seeing- it makes it real.
Thank you for writing such a beautiful piece dear, I haven't read good short angst oneshots in forever and this- this is just ♥
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I'm not sure if I explained it correctly but basically, the first part is Jaejoong dreaming about some sort of 'what if' he hadn't left the group with Yoochun and Junsu. Also, some incounscious part of him (in the dream) want to bring on the there is distance between him and Yunho (also with memory but like you know, our dream are trying to talk to us... so it's like the dream wants Jaejoong to confront it. I know it's complicated but well...)
As for everything that is (), that's Jaejoong's concious mind remembering things, so it's like he remembers more and more as the dreams goes on to finally remember completely at the end.
Then he wakes up and we understand what he means by the 'please just-'
Also, I'm glad you like :)
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Oh I think the song isL: Tae Sa Bi Ae ft. MJ - Nae Sarang
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(Song is:*)
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S'okay if I add you?
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