Not Even A Fraction ; chapter 3

Nov 02, 2010 13:18

Title: Not Even A Fraction
Author goobers
Rating: PG-13
Chapter:  3 / ?
Pairing/Focus:  Jonghyun / Onew ; Onew / Key
Summary: Onew has decided that he wants a girlfriend! So he decides to ask advice from his classmate Jonghyun. Things start off simple enough until their emotions suddenly change. What happens when Onew no longer wants a girlfriend, ( Read more... )

pairing; onew/key, pairing: jonghyun/onew, rating: pg-13, !fanfic

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ryeokyu November 2 2010, 19:38:31 UTC
I love how Onew was thinking about Key but described Jonghyun xD I love it :)

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gooberso1 November 3 2010, 02:38:51 UTC
Thank you! I found it cute as well! Silly Onew, failing at... not describing Key.

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pikagyu November 2 2010, 20:02:07 UTC
MINZY!!!! I approve. So... Onew is walking around without his glasses and no contacts on so he's practically blind? XD I find that hilarious. I'm glad you finally updated this!

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gooberso1 November 3 2010, 02:39:57 UTC
GOOD! You better, because I have a girl crush on Minzy! She's cute! I can picture Onew stumbling around even more thanks to not having his glasses. Poor guy, it's all Key's fault. XD

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life_not_knife November 3 2010, 00:57:39 UTC
wahhh i am sooo happy you updated... and Minzy!! yess... i love her, she's awesome :D nice choice... can't get better than Kim Kibum though! :D hehehe. awww and it was funny how he tried not to describe Key but ended up describing Jjong instead haha! wah I love this so much, thanks for updating BB. Can't wait for the next chapter. xxxxxxx

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gooberso1 November 3 2010, 03:53:49 UTC
Yay! I'm happy that your reading it! I love minzy as well! I wasn't going to use her originally, but Carmelle suggested it! She's got good ideas. :3 And.. I love Minzy too! keke. And poor Key, invading all of Jinki's thoughts! He didn't mean to describe Jjong, really! ;-; Hope to see you next chapter bby~ <33

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chunonew_rx November 3 2010, 14:31:56 UTC
i was reading this story on sfi but i will continue it here instead ^^
Key diva is totally hialirious
i love the way he is here XDD
i can imagine those three hot boys in the mall XDD *stalking*
jinki is a totally dense XDD
he's not realizing he isn't into girls LOL
but the moment with Minzy was too adorable
you can add jinki/chicken to the pairing list LOL
update soon ^^

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gooberso1 November 3 2010, 19:17:23 UTC
Oh! I know you! Hello!!! Ha ha! I'm gong to be posting it on both sfi and here, although.. I'll end up posting it on here first! Since the two versions are going to be a tiny bit different. Onew will have Minzy and the other an oc character. XDDD
I agree with you on that! I would stalk those three sexy guys too! haha!
And Jinki needs to realize it.. but.. he doesn't.
He's too distracted by the chicken. XD
Thank you for reading! :3

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android17swife November 4 2010, 00:03:27 UTC
I love this!!! Onew is sooo cute!!! XD Can't wait 4 the next chapter!!! Update soon!!!! SOON I SAY!!!! XD

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gooberso1 November 5 2010, 05:07:05 UTC
Thank you for reading! Onew is adorkable! I'll do my best to update a chapter a week, so look forward to that! Although it might be a little longer since I've got a test next week. <333

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