same fate same cellmate; her head in the pillow laughing cause we're stuck together this way 'til the next time we can play at Freedom Jungle Gym 40 bucks a stay 40 bucks to get away from her
-this is really well spun. do you ever write multiple drafts? i dont think ive seen the same poem on here twice. anyway, its something i do alot, returning to something i wrote and getting much more out of it. i think your poetry is great, but like all poetry its still loaded with more potential. have you ever taken creative writing with joanne moore?
no i'm taking that class next yeear. i write a lot of stuff on impulse. a lot of what you see is i'm just thinking about something and i get on livejournal and something comes out. i hardly ever go back to what i've written and make it better, but i know i should. new stuff keeps coming in though, and i just forget. haha
yeah, i know that feeling. youll enjoy moores class cause shell suck up to you and give you A's all the time, just beware she can be kind of bitchy at times. haha ask her about her time dating the guitarist of the 80s rock supergroup styx.
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same cellmate; her head in the pillow
laughing cause we're stuck together this way
'til the next time we can play
at Freedom Jungle Gym
40 bucks a stay
40 bucks to get away
from her
-this is really well spun. do you ever write multiple drafts? i dont think ive seen the same poem on here twice. anyway, its something i do alot, returning to something i wrote and getting much more out of it. i think your poetry is great, but like all poetry its still loaded with more potential. have you ever taken creative writing with joanne moore?
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