arbitrary stranger

[good_vibes_66]

i've never loved you more than this

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[d9_____________]

AHHHHH I LOVE IT!

especially this:

gotta let go; spill over my brim
that freckle on your neck
is that where it's always been?

and

the laughs get carried across the room
see the echos in trails
of red and blue and turquoise-maroon?

[good_vibes_66]

eeek i'm so glad you liike it

i need to start using different form, though..

[d9_____________]

have you ever tried writing lyrics? you know, keeping things in little 4 stanza verses and such. i think ive seen you try it before. its a good way to build things up, and then when it gets to a chorus its really dynamic

[messedupboiler]

i love this.