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A Place To Hide - Part 12

Dec 07, 2009 22:31

Title: A Place To Hide
Pairing: Emily/Naomi
Rating: Quite a bit of swearing, 'F' and 'C' words so probably R.
Word Count: 1,823
Disclaimer: I don't any of Skins or any of the characters, although i do wish Lily Loveless was mine ;-)
Summary: The characters are stolen from Skins in order for me to write about something that's gone on in my life ( Read more... )

a place to hide, fanfiction, emily, naomi, fanfic, skins, naomily

Comments 3

likeits4ever December 9 2009, 22:14:42 UTC

The ending....just gah, I really liked how realistic you was with this that this isn't a fairytale and that they've only really just started. Which was why I was kinda glad that Emily shushed Naomi before she said those three words 'if you mean it, then say it later' - This.
However I still can't help but feel for Effy and the potential that could be between her and Emily. For some reason it made me kinda melt when you described how Emily could look so fragile as if you were going to hurt her....I wanted effy to lean in for huggage. Anyways enough of me, good chap and glad to see you've got some sort of direction with where you're going :)

goodbye_laramie December 9 2009, 22:38:09 UTC

Thanks alot. Glad you're still with me :D

likeits4ever December 9 2009, 22:55:50 UTC

Yeah I am ;)