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Blood Upon His Breast/ Chapter 13

Apr 29, 2009 15:20

Title: Blood Upon His Breast [ch.13]
Pairing: Brian Haner / Zack Baker. Avenged Sevenfold.
Rating: NC-17.
Summary: Brian's high school career is about to go to hell.
Disclaimer: This is a work of fiction. All events, characters, names, and places featured here are either the product of the author’s imagination, or are used fictitiously. Any ( Read more... )

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goodxnight April 29 2009, 21:14:15 UTC

Alex cares about Zack a lot. Zack talks about him a lot more in the next couple chapters.

your icon is making me laugh because I still have werewolfzack on the brain.

sevenfoldbaby April 29 2009, 20:05:48 UTC

OMG..this is was such a good chapter, I loved it...so happy that Zacky got there in time, but sad that he got hurt so bad,(sorry for brian too), so can't wait for more of this...

morbid_darkone April 29 2009, 20:14:44 UTC

wow intense i love it. can't wait for more.^_^

reirage April 29 2009, 20:31:36 UTC

Alex still absolutely confuses me. I can't seem to figure out his intentions or Zack's. I really like the way you described the transformation of Alex from human to wolf. It was really well done. =]

The part at the end where Brian makes Zack promise he's not going to die was really heartfelt and touching. I like how Brian has so much inner conflict about Zack but he still cares about him.

O_O Goodness that's a long comment.

goodxnight April 29 2009, 21:12:23 UTC

I like long comments anyway, eh.

Alex is a lot of things. Zack talks about him a lot more later and they definitely have a kind of complicated dynamic, but personally. I like Alex's character. Despite his attempt at murdering/molesting my protagonist.

defiant2theend April 29 2009, 20:37:15 UTC

Wow. I really love this. I just got done reading the first one you posted today and then this one was here, like magic! I love this story, it's so much better than alot of supernatural ones I've read. Keep up the great work and can't wait for the next one, or two, LOL!!

goodxnight April 29 2009, 21:11:02 UTC

Supernatural is definitely an iffy genre.

Random, but there's this great show that comes on called Being Human. It's an awesome supernatural show and if you haven't seen it before, you should watch it.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=oCcu07fnwws&feature=PlayList&p=47FE0028FF2CD465&index=0&playnext=1