Blood Upon His Breast/ CHAPTER SIXTEEN

[goodxnight]

Title: Blood Upon His Breast [ch.16]
Pairing: Brian Haner / Zack Baker. Avenged Sevenfold.
Rating: NC-17.
Summary: Brian's high school career is about to go to hell.
Disclaimer: This is a work of fiction. All events, characters, names, and places featured here are either the product of the author’s imagination, or are used fictitiously. Any

Comments

[nevrlivedinfear]

Alex needs to get his hormones and rage under control.
"If Alex gets rowdy, just slap him on the nose with a newspaper and tell him to sit.OMG that was the best line ever! I love this story.

[breakinghabitsx]

haha i loved that line too!
made me laugh for like 5 minutes straight haha

i love this =]

[bellax_xmuerte]

this is wonderful <3

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[lyricsof_poison]

can't wait for more!

[xlionheart]

Love this. zack is so protective of brian - its cute.
And i secretly like alex even if he did try to kill brian.
But now theres even MORE questions, like what about brian's parents?
Ahh cant wait for more <3

[writtenaengel]

I thought I should let you know that I am quite disapointed that Brandan is not the one I was thinking of....=(

Omg Alex, first you molest him, then you try to kill him, then you try to rape him, you are one weird mofo! And not too much of a fan of Saller...

"Brian's not like other guys, okay? Fucking trust me for once," Umm yeah I want to know about the other guys...And the last guy (unless the last guy is the one that tried to sue, then I know)!

"If Alex gets rowdy, just slap him on the nose with a newspaper and tell him to sit." Hahah! Best line ever! =D

So I loved it as always...Except for the damn CLIFFHANGER!!!! =p
I can't wait for more!!

[xlionheart]

when brandon was first mentioned i really was picturing brandan schieppati too.