life

[gorilla1641]

hey guys wassup, me im chillin well heres a monolouge of mine im thinking about auditioning with tell me what you think

Comments

[mischu]

i like it. :thumbs up:

[livinoncloud9]

hey...

i think it's very good....you can thank me later for writing it for you. lol

it's a little poetic to be a monologue though....try to do it more like a person would speak..ya know what i mean? but it's good though. :)

On the Contrary

[uhohoreo618]

I think it sucked. No im not playing. You started off talking about living in the gettoh and what you could do "all the many things" and you didnt mention another one. You like went off of what you wer talking about. So i think is scuked.... you told me to be honest so i was..