Fanfic: Spicing Things Up (1/1), K+

[goshgollyg]

Title: Spicing Things Up

Comments

[vvmadp]

Oh! LOVE. THIS. I wish I had known/read it/about it sooner!!

Right here:
He could see her mind pulling her between her loyalty to Jeremy, and to Stefan, and the palpable tension that rest between them, begging to be released. He could feel his own breath speeding up, as he dared to slide his pinky over hers, a thrill running through his body when she didn't pull away.

I melted. A lot. So much perfection in the construction of these sentences and the words you chose to strung together. LOVED. IT. Pure poetry.

I will EAGERLY await anymore writing you want to share with the rest of the world...

[goshgollyg]

Thank you so much, darling! We'll see if I come up with anything else worthy of sharing, but I'm so happy you liked my little fanfic attempt! <3

[bibi_ca]

You kept them in charscter, that's a big plus! It was fun, a bit cheesy, but a good read, bravo!