Actually, to be honest, I was exhausted when I wrote it.
But part of it must be dumb luck, too, as there is very little editing ever done to journals for Tharag. (I edited my Carrion journals)
I will admit that I am trying to steer him towards speaking better now that he can read and write and he's planning on getting some "culture". That may be diluting the monologue, somewhat. ;)
I'm sure the next one will be interesting. Thanks for reading.
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This one felt a bit underedited, like you'd had a great time, but were in a bit of a rush to get it written. Still bleeding hilarious.
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But part of it must be dumb luck, too, as there is very little editing ever done to journals for Tharag. (I edited my Carrion journals)
I will admit that I am trying to steer him towards speaking better now that he can read and write and he's planning on getting some "culture". That may be diluting the monologue, somewhat. ;)
I'm sure the next one will be interesting. Thanks for reading.
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