Summer Days

[gossamerwings36]

Hoola Hoops shimming on Hips

Comments

[unabridged1]

Quite evocative of summer indeed

One comment style-wise - It always bothers me as a reader to see rhyming lines and non-rhyming lines in a poem. I think it should ne one or the other. You might want to test yourself by forcing every other line to rhyme and form a more consistant cadence.

[gossamerwings36]

Thanks :) for the input.