come from behind victory [for haneure]

Jan 08, 2015 11:09

For: haneure

Title: come from behind victory
Pairing(s)/focus: Jackson/Jinyoung
Rating: PG
Word count: 5130
Warnings: N/A
Author's notes: I really liked your second prompt and tried to do the pairing (one of my favorites!) justice. Unfortunately, I’m terrible with deadlines so it’s a bit rushed. I hope you can still find something about it to like!
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pairing: jackson/jr., year: 2015, rating: pg

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anonymous January 8 2015, 23:21:43 UTC
omg this is wonderful and hilarious. i love your pacing and the rhythm that the headings give the fic. it just reads so well and flows so naturally.

your jinson is so good ;__; jackson's competitive skinship vs jinyoung's natural arsenal of aegyo and how their methods are (mostly) equally effective is my favourite thing about them together (nah i'm just gonna follow my heart and be biased and say that jr wins lol). also jb and mark! i'm dying at exasperated leader jaebum and kinda useless but kinda useful friend mark.

and of course the ending! "Hey, Jackson. If I kiss you and there's no one around to see it, who gets the point?" excuse me as i wistfully sigh as i also scream into the distance.

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preorder February 9 2015, 22:25:44 UTC
thank you!!! ^^

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anonymous January 9 2015, 04:06:55 UTC
I LOVE IT ugh i have such a soft spot for their Competitive Love™ and you've captured it so well i'm going to reread this ten million times

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preorder February 9 2015, 22:25:49 UTC
thank you ^^

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haneure January 9 2015, 04:13:23 UTC
oh OH my god this is so gr8 and all things holy? i'm just... jackson and mark's playful banter and best bro-ness! jackson's entire life basically being gay chicken. jinson is such an underappreciated pairing this fic was so cute! markson bromance and jinson's competitiveness are honestly my two fav things, thank u ♥

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preorder February 9 2015, 22:26:02 UTC
thank you! your prompts were so fun to write!

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anonymous January 9 2015, 04:47:04 UTC
this is great and all, this totally believable jackson wang the movie starring jackson wang inner voice thing x perfectly indulgent jinyoung, but don't you think mark is a too eloquent/creative/obviously didn't take remedial english

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hipployta January 9 2015, 07:25:58 UTC
Jackson in denial, Jinyoungie slaying, and Mark just judging Jackson's ridiculousness lol

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preorder February 9 2015, 22:26:29 UTC
hehe thanks for reading ^^

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