Petals Fall

Nov 07, 2010 12:29

The first slips gently past the corner of my eye; barely noticed.

Startled, I look up and watch as the vibrant red falls in clumps,

Bunches that land to rest on the table.

The decent is not graceful nor is it appreciated.

Rose petals curl up, blacken at the edges,

And seem to die before my very eyes.

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Just something that came to me while I ( Read more... )

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casiedearestfic November 9 2010, 07:25:53 UTC
I decided I'd stalk your journal today, since you went MIA from mine! lol. I really like when rose petals are all black and crunchy around the edges, but still soft and living in the middle. Weird thing to like, but I love it.

Also, lj cut;
BODY OF YOUR POST

Just for future use! Took me ages to figure out too.

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got_fanfiction November 9 2010, 18:14:31 UTC
DUDE I TOTALLY JUST NOTICED MY POST!FAIL. D: and thanks for the cut! it pretty much made my day.

i didn't know you'd miss me that much. ;)

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got_fanfiction November 17 2010, 21:02:19 UTC
i just pulled a totally epic post fail when i tried out the ljcut. DX so if you got like, three updates or whatever (NO IDEA HOW THIS SYSTEM WORKS XD) then i am so sorry. D:

signed,

got-fanfiction :3

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casiedearestfic November 17 2010, 21:37:51 UTC
HAH, aw, that's okay, lj codes are hard until you learn them. But no, post edits don't send out notifictions, so we're all good there!

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