LOL you're not late at all omg its not even a completed work yet anyway ;) hahahah the train aww you're too sweet you don't have to read this just for me tho! :') and even if you do, you can take your time and just do it whenever you're free, and don't have to spend extra time commenting :D LMAO terminator voice it sounds bogus when you use that line now that i know you haven't seen the movie xD just kidding :B i lubb ur terminator voice~
SCREAMS I love where this is heading. I really love the slow build you're writing with Jackson and Mark. I think Jackson's feelings for Mark are there but the hints and glimpses of Mark's feelings make me so happy, because he is such a quiet person, he always keeps what he's feeling to himself and only really shows it through small words or gestures.
I'm glad that Jaebum and Jinyoung reconciled (good of Jackson to tell Jaebum that hello! Jinyoung is really hurting over this!!) and it was so cute how shy and embarrassed Jinyoung got when he told Jackson that Jaebum had kissed him. But now.. I can see why Jinyoung would be upset that Jaebum is flirting with someone else, I wonder how Jaebum will explain this one (perhaps to make Jinyoung jealous? but it seems that it would only make him sad)
omg thank you for reading and commenting on this chapter too! ;~; cries im so happy you like how markson's relationship is progressing and caught the pacing i intended to try for. i love slow-paced slice of life aus but they're difficult to write so basically rn im just challenging myself how long i can extend that awkward friends-but-not-lovers yet part hahaha. im glad you found jackson's feelings conveyed clearly, and im really pleased you spotted the hints and glimpses of mark's feelings too! :) bc this is from jackson's pov, added to mark's reticence, it might be difficult to detect how he really feels hehe. thats true, i think even irl you really need to pay attention to mark's small words and gestures to guess how he's feeling
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I CANT BELIEVE JAEBUM IS BEING A INSENSITIVE SHIT RIGHT NOW sighs. but i can imagine him trying to cover up his feelings for jinyoung that way, which is stupid because everyone with two eyes and common sense can see he is very much head over heels for him. poor jinyoung, being the sensible guy, he ends up getting very upset over these things... and i can almost see jackson trying to get jaebum to his senses and stop messing with jinyoung like that
now for mark and jackson "he's starting to be able to read mark's silences -- till he met mark, jackson had always thought that there was only one kind of silence. now, he thinks that there's a whole dictionary of themthis was so beautiful because that's how i imagine jackson being with mark irl, like mark is always quiet but there is this difference in each situation i.... dead
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IM DYING TOO i can't believe you left me such a lengthy comment!!! T__T its like twice the length of your last comment and the longest in the page ;__; lmao @ "where do i being" cutest typo ever and seriously it wasn't necessary for you to spend so much time and effort typing me such a fantastic and painstaking comment, it would be more than enough for me to know that you took the time to read this chapter too and like it and have been supporting this verse so encouragingly from the start
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huhuhu /i'll/ never tire of you saying that /greedy ;;;; you know its the most colossal compliment to me! :") YESS OKAY reading and replying your comment really helped me see the plot and future development more clearly, same for this one! :) you guys really inspired me a lot with your comments on the first chapter and this one would definitely be quite different without them (and not in a good way! :p) omigosh im very flattered if reading my fics could inspire you to write more wonderful markson fics!! ;~; aww i hope you manage to overcome your writers block soon and good luck with your fics hehe :)))
thank you so much for looking forward to the next update, taking the time to read this second part, and putting so much thought into leaving me such a brilliant, amazing and incredibly beautiful comment!!! ;u; your comments always make my day with their warmheartness and im unbelievably flattered that a person as nice and eloquent as you reads and likes my fics :))) sobs ty for your love and lots and lots of love for you too!!! ♥♥♥
awww thank you so much for anticipating this new chapter and reading it right away when it was posted! :D your support for this verse from the beginning means a lot and im so happy you enjoyed this update too ♥ LOL jaebum being stupid xD jjp just can't help being stupidly adorable in every au, its their thing ;; OMG mark watching over jackson pkm ;__; mark being hyunglike is so hot guhh
thank you so much for reading again and taking the additional time to leave me this adorable and lovely comment! :)) your icon omg angel jjp ;;
♡♡♡♡♡♡!!!!!!psycho_d68August 26 2015, 00:44:11 UTC
Yeahhhhh!!!! Finally i got to leave a comment!!!!! I read this yesterday after i go back from work.. and i swear person that stand beside me on train + the taxi driver i took look at me weirdly bcoz im squealing+smiling+mumbling like a mad person.. but i forgot my LJ password so i end up make a new one this morning.. oh Goddddd, thank u my lovely Jackson for going meet JB & try to fix JJP broken state.. finally someone knocked some sense to his brain.. but unfortunately its not last longer since his being stupid again flirting with bomi -.-" & being insensitive towards Jinyoung feelings.. I love this part : jinyoung tugs on jaebum's sleeve. "hyung, i'm thirsty," he whines in a babyish voice jackson has never heard before. but jaebum doesn't look unfamiliar with it as his face softens instantly. "aww, just bear with it for a minute, we'll go get drinks right away, okay?" he practically coos, wiping away jinyoung's sweat from his matted bangs gently. Awwwwww~~~ they being lovey dovey together without care about MarkSon presence...
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RE: ♡♡♡♡♡♡!!!!!!gotchickAugust 27 2015, 06:21:45 UTC
omg thank you so much for reading this right away when you got back from work (in public too!), and coming back to leave me such a lengthy, gorgeous comment which you didn't have to!! ;~; honestly i'd be overjoyed just to know that you'd read the update and liked it :))) OMG the taxi driver and train person HAHAHA squealing and smiling and mumbling to yourself like a mad person omfg you're too adorable ;AAA; come here and let me squish youuu~!!! LOL what you forgot your password thats hilarious i can't with your cuteness welp
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I'm glad that Jaebum and Jinyoung reconciled (good of Jackson to tell Jaebum that hello! Jinyoung is really hurting over this!!) and it was so cute how shy and embarrassed Jinyoung got when he told Jackson that Jaebum had kissed him. But now.. I can see why Jinyoung would be upset that Jaebum is flirting with someone else, I wonder how Jaebum will explain this one (perhaps to make Jinyoung jealous? but it seems that it would only make him sad)
I love it! Anticipating future chapters!
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where do i being
I CANT BELIEVE JAEBUM IS BEING A INSENSITIVE SHIT RIGHT NOW
sighs. but i can imagine him trying to cover up his feelings for jinyoung that way, which is stupid because everyone with two eyes and common sense can see he is very much head over heels for him. poor jinyoung, being the sensible guy, he ends up getting very upset over these things...
and i can almost see jackson trying to get jaebum to his senses and stop messing with jinyoung like that
now for mark and jackson
"he's starting to be able to read mark's silences -- till he met mark, jackson had always thought that there was only one kind of silence. now, he thinks that there's a whole dictionary of themthis was so beautiful because that's how i imagine jackson being with mark irl, like mark is always quiet but there is this difference in each situation i.... dead ( ... )
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thank you so much for looking forward to the next update, taking the time to read this second part, and putting so much thought into leaving me such a brilliant, amazing and incredibly beautiful comment!!! ;u; your comments always make my day with their warmheartness and im unbelievably flattered that a person as nice and eloquent as you reads and likes my fics :))) sobs ty for your love and lots and lots of love for you too!!! ♥♥♥
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Mark quietly watching over Jackson. XD
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OMG mark watching over jackson pkm ;__; mark being hyunglike is so hot guhh
thank you so much for reading again and taking the additional time to leave me this adorable and lovely comment! :)) your icon omg angel jjp ;;
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oh Goddddd, thank u my lovely Jackson for going meet JB & try to fix JJP broken state.. finally someone knocked some sense to his brain.. but unfortunately its not last longer since his being stupid again flirting with bomi -.-" & being insensitive towards Jinyoung feelings..
I love this part :
jinyoung tugs on jaebum's sleeve. "hyung, i'm thirsty," he whines in a babyish voice jackson has never heard before. but jaebum doesn't look unfamiliar with it as his face softens instantly.
"aww, just bear with it for a minute, we'll go get drinks right away, okay?" he practically coos, wiping away jinyoung's sweat from his matted bangs gently.
Awwwwww~~~ they being lovey dovey together without care about MarkSon presence... ( ... )
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Usually i can... damn, theres so many typo & my sentences structure are messy -.-"
Anyways, u wrote my name!!!! At the A/N :')
*CRIES* thats so sweet of u to do that... i feel honoured ♡♡♡♡
Cant wait for more updateeeeeee....
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But still i cant edit my comment TT____TT
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