I could say that I did not cry a ridiculous amount of tears over this fic, but if I did, I would be lying. The portrayal of 67 as Jackson, but also not. That 67 was jealous of Jackson because he used to call Mark Yi-En while 67 doesn't. The video that Jackson recorded for Mark, while somehow knowing that something would probably happen to him in the future.
tl;dr, you tore my heart right out of my chest, but it's okay, i didn't need it anyway. ; A ;
omg this comment made me smile so hard my face cracked but thats ok i didn't need a face anyway ;A; /becomes no face from totoro
sobs im so sorry to make you cry ridiculously but im so happy you enjoyed this despite the angst!! :D omigosh your comment is so perceptive, i didn't even notice some of the things you pointed out haha. i never really thought of 67 and jackson as separate people but i guess they are *-* huhu im so pleased you noticed the significance of the yi-en thing :3 im so glad that you liked all of these parts of the plot as well as the video part!! :))
IM SOZ ;;; /puts your heart back in your chest thank you so much for taking the time to read this rather long fic and the additional effort to leave me such a lovely, thoughtful and sweet comment!! :) it really made my day ♥ whispers i love your icon btw ;n;
Okay! I've re-read the fic, cried a little bit more because of it, and noticed some other things I didn't the first time because I was too busy trying not to drench my pillow in tears. :'D altho i tend to overthink things as a lit student because im trained to infer that people with sweaty palms are good at sex like who even let shakespeare write classics this guy is just sex jokes and crude remarksMark trying to convince himself that 67 is Jackson is one of the worst things ever, because he knows at first that 67 is not Jackson, but at the same time, he's still Jackson and uggh please take my heart but you already have it anyways
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OH MY GOD x 100 you already know how shocked and happy i was when i received this comment i honestly didn't expect you to come back and leave another (ridiculously amazing and lengthy) comment for me when the first one was already flawless and perfect and more than enough!!! ;A; holy shit this comment is so long i didn't know comments could be that long lmao lj usually makes me split them up in two or more xD im seriously speechless by how intricately you analyzed the fic and literally wrote a play-by-play commentary omfg even on my other fic which was twice the length of this i've never received such a LONG comment T.T
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SCREAMS AT YOU FOR THE REST OF ETERNITY HOLY F U C K
"when Mark's hands were elbow deep in its heart or some other less appropriate place, and say something in its robotic, still unedited voice that made Mark snort a startled laugh." /UGLY CRYING/
GONNA CRY THROUGH THIS WHOLE FIC I CAN FEEL IT
Jinyoung has noticed that he's more dexterous with his left hand LEFT HANDED SQUAD
"Then get on your knees and suck me off."
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"Mark? Mark? I was joking! Christ, get up. I won't tell, okay? I'll take it to my grave. No, stop it -- Oh, God."
THIS IS SO JAEBUM I'M LAUGHING SO HARD JFC
Mark would never submit to any other man, but because it's Jackson, somehow it doesn't seem so important who's in charge.
SHEDS A TEAR
SWEET JESUS SO MUCH SEX BLESS U
This intense yearning to possess Jackson makes Mark less and less certain if this is love or obssession.VDFUBVUIDFBVNSDOCNSDIOVDNFIOSB
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hi sorry for the delay i had to go get a new jr icon to match yours hehe have i mentioned how gorgeous your icon is btw? ;; im so tired of all my old icons even tho i know the beaver one always makes you lose your shit :B
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Well fuck, you're as brilliant as always. That ending basically finished me off. Whoa, just- really i'm speechless. This was amazing- i started off as a quite detached viewer of this love story, but I think that just like 67 grew more and more humane I grew more and more invested. Because the picture perfect begining didn't seem as alluring to me as the flaws that you built up more and more. As I see it, this story progressed along with Jackson's android doppelganger and well yeah- you're brilliant
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oh my god im screaming i can't believe you left me such a long comment whY ARE YOU SO NICE TO ME WHYYY ;___; I LOVE YOU SO MUCH i am reduced to incoherently professing my adoration for you i don't know how to express how grateful i am for everything you've done for me and how your presence is one of the most beautiful things in my life ;n; ok starting to sound creepy imma shut up nao lmao but you know how deeply i respect and admire your intellect right?? your approval means everything to me so im super happy that you enjoyed this fic so much, enough to leave me such an amazing, passionate comment!!! :D
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PLEASE DON'T CALL YOURSELF ANNOYING OMG i am offended i will be mad at anyone who dares to call you or anything you do annoying, even if its you yourself bc you are the loveliest, sweetest, kindest, cutest and nicest person i've met online and do you even know how precious you are to me?? I LOVE YOU SO MUCH T.T omg you worship me?? nO I WORSHIP YOU AND YOUR AMAZINGNESS UGHHH
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Crying because this is too beautiful, how you described Mark's feelings when Jackson died and just how you described the love between them, how Mark knew Jackson from the back of his hand, and the little details that you added in about the real Jackson and the little snippets of their past . . .
I don't what to say anymore but everything was just beautiful T_T
hi!! :)) omg im so happy you enjoyed this and felt it was beautiful :D awww im super pleased that you felt mark's feelings and their relationship was well described, and that you noticed the back of the hand part it shows how thoughtfully you read the fic and im so touched ;A; im delighted that you liked the flashback snippets and details about the real jackson too :))
huhu you don't have to say anything else, your comment is already perfect and wonderful and im glad you liked everything ^^ thank you so much for taking the time to read this and the additional effort to leave me such an incredibly sweet, lovely comment!! it means so much ♥ also im glad you commented here hehe so i could thank you for adding me and if you read any of my other fics too :3
aaahhhh you've done it again! you did such a beautiful job of portraying Mark's inner guilt/obsession/turmoil/love/everythingelse :D I really liked the brief splices of the JJP interaction, the outside 3rd party narration really added that additional layer to keep from getting swept up in Mark's mania
and that ending, yay! I'm glad Mark was finally able to admit to himself that he couldn't replicate Jackson 100% (b/c reading how he was so delusional in thinking Jackson was anything but No.67 was heartbreaking ><) now he's finally at peace with everything, or at least as much as he can be considering he circumstances
"He had the entire lexicon of Jackson's smiles at his fingertips, because the only thing Jackson loved as much as he loved Mark was smiling." I just really loved this line, it was so simple yet so sweet, filled me up with all the warm fuzzy feelings :)
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tl;dr, you tore my heart right out of my chest, but it's okay, i didn't need it anyway. ; A ;
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sobs im so sorry to make you cry ridiculously but im so happy you enjoyed this despite the angst!! :D omigosh your comment is so perceptive, i didn't even notice some of the things you pointed out haha. i never really thought of 67 and jackson as separate people but i guess they are *-* huhu im so pleased you noticed the significance of the yi-en thing :3 im so glad that you liked all of these parts of the plot as well as the video part!! :))
IM SOZ ;;; /puts your heart back in your chest
thank you so much for taking the time to read this rather long fic and the additional effort to leave me such a lovely, thoughtful and sweet comment!! :) it really made my day ♥ whispers i love your icon btw ;n;
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"when Mark's hands were elbow deep in its heart or some other less appropriate place, and say something in its robotic, still unedited voice that made Mark snort a startled laugh." /UGLY CRYING/
GONNA CRY THROUGH THIS WHOLE FIC I CAN FEEL IT
Jinyoung has noticed that he's more dexterous with his left hand LEFT HANDED SQUAD
"Then get on your knees and suck me off."
"..."
"Mark? Mark? I was joking! Christ, get up. I won't tell, okay? I'll take it to my grave. No, stop it -- Oh, God."
THIS IS SO JAEBUM I'M LAUGHING SO HARD JFC
Mark would never submit to any other man, but because it's Jackson, somehow it doesn't seem so important who's in charge.
SHEDS A TEAR
SWEET JESUS SO MUCH SEX BLESS U
This intense yearning to possess Jackson makes Mark less and less certain if this is love or obssession.VDFUBVUIDFBVNSDOCNSDIOVDNFIOSB ( ... )
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I don't what to say anymore but everything was just beautiful T_T
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huhu you don't have to say anything else, your comment is already perfect and wonderful and im glad you liked everything ^^ thank you so much for taking the time to read this and the additional effort to leave me such an incredibly sweet, lovely comment!! it means so much ♥ also im glad you commented here hehe so i could thank you for adding me and if you read any of my other fics too :3
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and that ending, yay! I'm glad Mark was finally able to admit to himself that he couldn't replicate Jackson 100% (b/c reading how he was so delusional in thinking Jackson was anything but No.67 was heartbreaking ><) now he's finally at peace with everything, or at least as much as he can be considering he circumstances
"He had the entire lexicon of Jackson's smiles at his fingertips, because the only thing Jackson loved as much as he loved Mark was smiling." I just really loved this line, it was so simple yet so sweet, filled me up with all the warm fuzzy feelings :)
once again, I loved this!! :D
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