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lizwinlove September 5 2012, 05:49:49 UTC
I discovered this at work yesterday, read through the first twenty two chapters and then work was over. I had an errand to run downtown, so I hopped on the train, and became very upset because I couldn't find an unsecured wifi network and I had no 3G/4G coverage!!! Finally got the password for a wifi network at my destination and opened up the three last chapters and read them on my way back to my car. So I was highly engrossed in this story ( ... )

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thilia September 7 2012, 23:54:44 UTC
Soooo... you already know how much I adored this, but I thought I'd comment again, officially. *g*

Basically, this fic gave me a lot of ~FEELS~ and I'm sure, I will definitely come back to this at some point to read it again because it's long and brilliant and funny and hot and they're all amazingly in character, and I loved it. ♥

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goten0040 September 8 2012, 23:59:02 UTC
Your art made this fix awesome. Legit.

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tendertash12 September 8 2012, 18:58:51 UTC
My soul! You took it away with this uhmazing story. I loved everything about this, even the bittersweet ending because it's real. What I love most about reading your stories is that you are able to use showverse facts and make them fit for your plot: Kendall's absent father, Camille's dramatics, James' ambition and drive, Kendall's stubbornness, etc.

This story was just perfect, even though you tortured poor Carlos! Regardless of that, this had everything to make it a great read, with the angst and the love and the laughs and the antagonists.

So glad to see another story from you, great job again!

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goten0040 September 8 2012, 23:58:25 UTC
Carlos' story is actually very personal to me. I'm certainly glad it tugged your heart strings. Lol, thank you very much for the review, love. :)

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hortense September 9 2012, 02:26:56 UTC
This was wonderful!!

I should probably say more, but I could go on forever and ever! Perfect amount of sexiness and angst in a very believable verse.

Loved it.

And the art work was beautiful. Well done!!

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candidcanoe October 4 2012, 04:41:31 UTC
Wow, this was awesome. The descriptions of the dancing were amazing and vivid and pulled me right in. I love when a story plays out like a perfect movie in my head, clear visuals, and you've written something which does exactly that. I loved Kendall's progression through the story, going from impassive to hopeful. And maybe he's still not sure what he wants to do, but he's open to those possibilities now. His development was believable and I found myself completely engrossed. Great cast of characters, the ones we all know and love with their own spin. The ending left me feeling wistful yet hopeful; I was near tears with it. I'm happy to see them doing what's best. It was a great, realistic ending. Thanks for writing.

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