Comment fic meme #2
After the first round of got_exchange we had a surprisingly successful comment fic meme going for a while (here's a list of all the fics that were written last time), so I thought it might be fun to do this again. (Like last time, it's posted on the mod account journal because I don't want to enable anonymous comments on the exchange community.)
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Dirty talk? Because Brienne is shy and a bit of a prude and Jaime has a filthy mouth and likes teasing/annoying others...
Orgasm denial/control? Since both can get pretty combative or competitive on occasion...
Creative ways of working around the Kingsguard oath of "fathering no children"? Well, there is moon tea, but there might also be plenty of alternatives to P-I-V sex...
Obedience/taking & giving orders, not necessarily on the battlefield?
Or get more creative, as long as it's consensual. Um, I will just leave that here then. *slinks away*
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“So fucking wet,” he rasps while his left hand’s thumb traces circles around her clit. “You’re thinking about it, aren’t you? Look at your cunt. You can’t wait for me to fuck you, can you?”
From the way she’s moaning beneath him, he can’t be too wrong.
“Seven hells, even your thighs are getting wet.” He runs his thumb along her inner thigh - no harm in pushing things a bit. “I should make you taste it one of these times,” he says casually, almost joking, but he doesn’t miss the way the blue in her eyes becomes darker at that.
He isn’t expecting what comes out of her mouth after.
“And why don’t you taste it, instead ( ... )
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“Not yet.” She moves his hand out of the way before he can even attempt to touch himself.
Well, it was worth a try. “As my lady commands,” he whispers, and he doesn’t even try to make it sound completely serious. Brienne just looks down at him, still half-clothed while he’s naked. She’s smiling a small, slightly wicked smile, and Jaime wishes he had realized sooner that she had it in her.
And gods help him, he can’t help enjoying this whole game not just because it’s good, but because Brienne is nothing like Cersei in this as well and figuring her out all over again makes it even better. Sometimes he hates that he just can’t read her like an open book, the same way he could read his sister with a mere look, but other times it just makes the entire thing more thrilling ( ... )
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I really loved how you still kept to character especially with Brienne being a little unsure of herself and how she should behave. I could totally see that, and totally see Jaime having a naughty streak and a filthy mouth! And I really loved the last part where Brienne takes control and basically makes love to his stump, something Cersei could never do for Jaime. You did a fab job!
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And that said thanks so much! It's totally great to hear that they felt IC through this - while in my headcanon given time and practice and Jaime coaxing her with his filthy mouth Brienne totally tops I also felt like I couldn't just jump into part three out of the blue. And phew it's totally awesome to know that the last part worked for you, I hadn't planned on it happening but it felt like a good conclusion. (Also one of the endless reasons why I ship them is that she likes all of him, missing hand or not, so that might have played a part..) again, thank you! :D I'm really glad that you liked this. And that it was a useful remedy against cold weather.. ;)
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Anyway, thank ever so much for tackling this -- and at such length! You really don't have to be insecure about writing het smut in the future - I'd say this was nothing to feel doubtful about. I particularly like how you tied in the porny bits with the character development within their relationships - Brienne learning to admit what she wants and to go for it and Jaime having to figure out how to be with someone whom he still has to learn how to read (even with genuine attraction and affection, there won't be any miraculous understanding...). And the way their old injuries become part of what turns them on and moves them emotionally was an unexpected, but really moving touch.
Thanks again!
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That said thanks so much! :D I'm really glad that this worked for you - that prompt was seriously too good and I was really hoping that it'd deliver (and that the dirty talk wouldn't sound terrible, so it's good to have a confirm that I didn't fail miserably on that front ;) ). And it's totally great to know that the character development in this did work for you too - I figured that considering how they're wired they wouldn't jump straight into part three over there. And it's totally great to know that you liked the surprise!scars/injuries-as-a-turn-on thing, I hadn't really planned for it to happen but it felt fitting to be in the closing part so I just went for it. Thanks so very much again ♥!
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