Comment fic meme #2

Mar 05, 2012 15:28

After the first round of got_exchange we had a surprisingly successful comment fic meme going for a while (here's a list of all the fics that were written last time), so I thought it might be fun to do this again. (Like last time, it's posted on the mod account journal because I don't want to enable anonymous comments on the exchange community.)

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Jaime/Sansa ishi_chan March 5 2012, 19:56:13 UTC
they talk about Joffrey (and maybe Cersei too)

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FILL: Jaime/Sansa; "Ignorance and Bliss"; R (Part One) lainemontgomery March 12 2012, 20:22:59 UTC
“I didn’t do it.”

They’ve had this conversation so many times- while riding side by side through the dense woods, while sitting together by the weak campfire, while curled up against each other under tattered furs on a tiny camp bed. She always takes care to look him right in the eye- lack of eye contact is the easiest way to spot a liar, Petyr used to sayAnd he always nods, always attempts to mollify her with a non-committal “As you say.” But his eyes seem to look past her, never locking on her own fervent gaze. Then he tries to divert her attention, whether with crude japes to make her gasp and laugh or with the deliberate movement of his hand over her curves, his lips on her collarbone ( ... )

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FILL: Jaime/Sansa; "Ignorance and Bliss"; R (Part Two) lainemontgomery March 12 2012, 20:24:41 UTC
For while she is grateful for Jaime’s help, while she appreciates his companionship- more than appreciates it, really- there is always the sinking feeling in her stomach, the twisting confusion in her brain-

How can he feel that way about his own blood? How can he feel that way about his own son?

It is the latter that prickles her skin into gooseflesh, the latter that makes her want to slap herself silly- this man that she’s trusting to bring her North, this man that she’s accepted as her truest ally, this man that she’s taken into her bed- Joffrey’s father.Yet if she’s learned anything from Petyr Baelish, it is the ability to sift through information, to keep what is useful and place the rest to the side- not discarding, never ignoring, but keeping it away from the here and now. Perhaps one day she’ll confront Jaime with what she knows and ask him how, ask him why ( ... )

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Re: FILL: Jaime/Sansa; "Ignorance and Bliss"; R (Part Two) midnightblack07 March 13 2012, 03:10:22 UTC
ohh this is so heart-wrenchingly brilliant bb!!

I really like this darker take on their relationship, how Jaime's lack of fealty to her family makes her second guess his loyalty to her (as it should tbh, because she doesn't inhabit his head and she doesn't really know), and the ending is perfect given where her thoughts were earlier--really beautifully done (as always hehe)!! :D

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Re: FILL: Jaime/Sansa; "Ignorance and Bliss"; R (Part Two) lainemontgomery March 13 2012, 10:23:14 UTC
Thank you, my darling! I had to go to a dark place here, because you're right- why in the world SHOULD Sansa trust Jaime, when he's so willing to put Joffrey's memory aside and screw Cersei over? And yet she needs him, needs someone to put her faith in after Petyr and the Vale, and I really believe that after the whole Alayne thing, her sense of self would be so weirdly tied up with her sexuality...guhhh. Angst.

Your comments are so so SO appreciated, as always, lovely. :)

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Re: FILL: Jaime/Sansa; "Ignorance and Bliss"; R (Part Two) ishi_chan March 13 2012, 08:52:59 UTC
Oh, this was heartbreaking and so so beautiful (and a little sexy too, I have to admit).

I like how Sansa has all these complicated feelings, how Littlefinger is constantly in her head and yet she's still distinctly Sansa underneath.

“Little wolf bitch.” And she’d bitten down on her lip to keep from crying out, hard enough to draw blood; the words echoed in her ears, this time in Joffrey’s triumphant crow- she could see him smiling down at her from the Iron Throne as she fell to her knees, back bloodied and dress torn-

My poor baby, everything about this just makes me want to hug her until the world is alright again (which it probably never will be).

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Re: FILL: Jaime/Sansa; "Ignorance and Bliss"; R (Part Two) lainemontgomery March 13 2012, 10:26:09 UTC
This prompt was so interesting to me- Jaime/Sansa are my bb's, and I thought that I'd kind of written every permutation of them...but WAIT. If Sansa knows the Lannister secret, then she's basically aware of the fact that she's having sex with Joffrey's dad. NOT OKAY. THANK YOU for this wonderfully squicky image that won't go away! It really made me look at the pairing in a completely different light. (And I just want to hug Sansa too. ALL the time.)

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Re: FILL: Jaime/Sansa; "Ignorance and Bliss"; R (Part Two) just_a_dram March 17 2012, 17:59:25 UTC
Guh. This slays me. It's sad and twisted and dark, all the things Jaime/Sansa could very easily be. And sickly sexy.

If Sansa knows about Joff being his son, it's definitely something that's interesting to explore how she might deal with that reality, and it's so believable that she might continue to seek him out, while being repulsed at the same time. So broken. The silence between them speaks volumes.

You should just write Jaime/Sansa for always. :)

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Re: FILL: Jaime/Sansa; "Ignorance and Bliss"; R (Part Two) lainemontgomery March 17 2012, 23:11:30 UTC
I don't know how it didn't occur to me before how...for lack of a better word...gross the Jaime/Sansa pairing is when you assume that she knows about Joff. Because what do I love more than twisted sick weird sexytimes? Nothing. That's what.

You should just write Jaime/Sansa for always. :)

If I could, I SO would. ;)

You. Are. Amazing.

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