Comment fic meme #2

[gotexchange_mod]

After the first round of got_exchange we had a surprisingly successful comment fic meme going for a while (here's a list of all the fics that were written last time), so I thought it might be fun to do this again. (Like last time, it's posted on the mod account journal because I don't want to enable anonymous comments on the exchange community.)

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Fill: Euron/Victarion, hatesex [dub/non-con, violence] 1/2

[linndechir]

My first attempt at writing Greyjoys and ... I basically have no idea what I just wrote because I can write Victarion, but I have no clue how to write Euron. Pre-series (so, sorry, no mad post-ADWD!Victarion).
Warnings: it's Euron/Victarion, so obviously there is dub-con/non-con, violence, blood, and more mentions of rape. Also, Victarion's manpain is all over the place.
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Victarion took always care to control himself around his brother, for he knew that if he ever lost his temper, he might not know when to stop. The kinslayer is damned in the eyes of gods and men - and so he swallows his anger every time.

But what truly stays his hand whenever Euron provokes him with his laughter and his smirk and his stinging words is the memory of that one night when Victarion did lose his temper. He does not even remember what had caused his rage that time, what Euron had said to make him so furious that his fist slammed into Euron's smile before he even thought about it. He only realised what he had done when he heard the crack of bone

Fill: Euron/Victarion, hatesex [dub/non-con, violence] 2/2

[linndechir]

I used him like a salt wife, Victarion reminded himself as he tucked himself in and stormed out of the room. I used him like some greenlander whore on a raid, bent over and screaming, a quick fuck in a sea of her husband's and her son's blood, and he let me. What does it say about Euron that he let me?

He wanted to laugh, but he felt as if he'd choke on his own tongue if he tried.

It means - the voice in his head sounded painfully like Balon's, calm and firm and always a bit condescending - it means that he does not and will never fear you. No matter what you do to him.

Victarion went to sleep on the Iron Victory, and hoped he would not have to face Euron in the next days. He did not know what he would do if he saw Euron smiling through his split lips. It was like a joke Victarion would never understand.

Re: Fill: Euron/Victarion, hatesex [dub/non-con, violence] 2/2

[sternflammenden]

Oh my god this is unbelievable. GREYJOYCEST.

Your Euron is so creepy and twisted and wrong, laughing mechanically through Victarion's attempt to do his worst, and the Balonesque voice in his head at the end, the allusion the saltwives. I loved this. You should totally write more Greyjoycest, not only because fandom just needs more, but because you've done it so well.

Re: Fill: Euron/Victarion, hatesex [dub/non-con, violence] 2/2

[linndechir]

Thank you so much. :D

"Creepy and twisted and wrong" is about the only characterisation I have for Euron. ;) And Balon kinda sneaked in there because I ship Balon/Victarion like nobody's business. I really feel like writing more Greyjoycest now... I really want Victarion to kill his bro, to be honest.

Re: Fill: Euron/Victarion, hatesex [dub/non-con, violence] 2/2

[sternflammenden]

That's basically all I've ever gone on. He's such a shallow character in canon, although those can be fun to write.

Yes, write more, I'd love to read it, especially your take on kinslaying!Victarion.

Re: Fill: Euron/Victarion, hatesex [dub/non-con, violence] 2/2

[linndechir]

He's just there to give Victarion more reasons to angst.

I'll see about that. Victarion killing Euron would just be gore followed by manpain, I'm afraid.

Re: Fill: Euron/Victarion, hatesex [dub/non-con, violence] 2/2

[alcanis_ivennil]

Yesssss! Do it! I love his manpain. Euron would probably die with a laugh.

Re: Fill: Euron/Victarion, hatesex [dub/non-con, violence] 2/2

[lydzi]

This House kills me with their dysfunctionnement. I love your Euron. He's almost Joker-ish with his permanent terrible terrible laugh.

Victarion will always loose and I like how you pinpoint that. It's not a question of actually winning, it's all in the head. There's something so tragic about him that, for all the violence, I always tend to want to protect him and tell him to get away from this crazy family ^^.

Re: Fill: Euron/Victarion, hatesex [dub/non-con, violence] 2/2

[linndechir]

Euron is a lot like the Joker. Only less cool. Sometimes i feel like the only Greyjoy fan who doesn't like Euron.

Yep, it's all in his head. I adore Victarion and I hope that he'll get to kill Euron in canon, but I'm afraid even that wouldn't really be a satisfying victory for him. Victarion is just so, so broken. The guy is such a mess. I can definitely understand your protective urges about him. ^^ It's why I ship Balon/Victarion, I think they were somewhat healthier together. ;)

Re: Fill: Euron/Victarion, hatesex [dub/non-con, violence] 1/2

[alcanis_ivennil]

SO PERFECT. Marry me. <3

Euron is SO Euron. I bet this is exactly what would happen. And Victarion is somewhat tragic with all his violent stupidity.

Also, Victarion and Stannis totally need to found a club for people whose brothers are dicks.

Re: Fill: Euron/Victarion, hatesex [dub/non-con, violence] 1/2

[linndechir]

I'm so relieved you like it. :D I love Victarion and I completely get him, but I don't like Euron much and I'm very insecure about writing him. So glad it wasn't a complete failure.

Haha, yes. Victarion and Stannis actually have quite a few things in common, except they deal with their issues in COMPLETELY different ways.

Re: Fill: Euron/Victarion, hatesex [dub/non-con, violence] 1/2

[alcanis_ivennil]

Stannis: angst, grind teeth, be sarcastic, dream about Davos

Victarion: angst, fuck dusky woman, dream about killing Euron

Re: Fill: Euron/Victarion, hatesex [dub/non-con, violence] 1/2

[linndechir]

I can't believe Stannis is the healthier one of these two. ;)

Now I want general angsty fic about Victarion.

Re: Fill: Euron/Victarion, hatesex [dub/non-con, violence] 1/2

[alcanis_ivennil]

Me too. Let's just write Victarion's manpain. Odd how I used to hate both him and Aeron and now they are so exciting.