Those Eyes

[gothic_vixen]

Those are the eyes

Comments

[vow_of_purity]

"an angle carried off in the breeze"..did you mean angel?? because angle doesn't make sense.

[gothic_vixen]

yes i meant angel....fast fingers.

[vow_of_purity]

still, I liked that poem; a bit depressing, but still it was nice.

[gothic_vixen]

Yeah, I think its one of my better ones, the different metering helps. Its not meant to be depressing, but just like damn, now I know better.