Poetry? yes!

Jul 05, 2016 22:32

I write stories, but I am under no delusion about my talent as a wordsmith. I consider I do okay for a second language, anyway.

A literary genre I know little about is poetry, though I can admire beauty when I come across it. But write it myself? Very intimidating.

I was totally floored by a poem by my friend lab_jazz, and it came with a template that ( Read more... )

meme, poetry

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haldoor July 6 2016, 04:18:31 UTC
Oh! This is fantastic! It really is beautiful and speaks so well of where you're from!

I must try it too!

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gottalovev July 7 2016, 02:12:46 UTC
thanks dear! I sure tried to convey a bit of where I live...

and yes, you should do it to! the friend I took it from did one that is astounding. I am sure yours would be stellar too!

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daria234 July 6 2016, 04:57:38 UTC
lovely imagery!

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gottalovev July 7 2016, 02:13:03 UTC
thank you! I tried very hard! lol!

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lab_jazz July 6 2016, 09:00:26 UTC
That is wonderful Lou. Not only the imagery of your physical environment but also how you've managed to express the love that is enshrined in your connections to family.

I loved reading it

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gottalovev July 7 2016, 02:15:38 UTC
thanks Lyn! well I did try my best... and even with the template, as you can see it came out totally different from yours in style (that I really, really love), so that's pretty interesting in itself!

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mel_b_angel July 7 2016, 00:54:45 UTC
this is lovely! really lovely :)

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gottalovev July 7 2016, 02:16:08 UTC
thank you! it was HARD, and so different from what I usually do. which made it fun, too!

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