Comments | gotulloch: Nano Pono 5 of 11

gotulloch

Nano Pono 5 of 11

Feb 17, 2012 20:59

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Let the Questions Begin

Steve was sitting in his office the next morning going over some of the information Chin had been able to find. He had sent Chin and Kono to question the two women who had filed complaints but ( Read more... )

h50, genre gen, fanfic

Comments 6

simplyn2deep February 18 2012, 02:58:35 UTC

oh wow. Jackson is Governor Steven's nephew. He should know to act better because it's a direct reflection of those you work for.

Horrible spot for Harris to be put in as well. eek

How is Jackson NOT the laughing stock of his team and others he works with when he acts like that?! My God when is he going to be knocked down a peg or two?!

Hope nothing happens to the woman who gave information at the last minute.

can't wait for more!

gotulloch February 18 2012, 04:01:03 UTC

He should know, but he's an idiot. He was also fun to write. LOL

He probably is but no one wants to be the one to tell the governor that!

I did feel bad for Harris. I wanted one of them to be a good guy.

4thoffive February 18 2012, 03:02:30 UTC

I hope Ms Malone is going to be alright. It was smart of Steve to give her a secret word to say. Still enjoying this very much.

gotulloch February 18 2012, 04:02:15 UTC

I'm glad that you're still enjoying this. Thank you.

sherry57 February 18 2012, 07:04:04 UTC

I always love seeing how Steve znd danny work together. They really understand each other. Poor Harris on the other hand...I don't think he could ever have that kind of working relationship with Jackson!
Intriguing story...looking forward to the next chapter hon.

gotulloch February 19 2012, 06:23:51 UTC

Thank you!