Nano Pono 6 of 11

Feb 18, 2012 23:46


Disclaimer: Hawaii 5-0 and characters belong to CBS, if you think otherwise I can show you my portfolio, it’s seriously lacking.

Thank you my beta Traw for helping me keep on track.  I have made some changes since it was betaed so any mistakes are mine.

The Partner

After lunch had been consumed the four men set out hoping to find Mr. Nihipali at his ( Read more... )

h50, genre gen, fanfic

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4thoffive February 19 2012, 05:05:00 UTC
Ick this Jackson guy is such a creep. Can't wait for Steve and Danny to take him down a few pegs.

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gotulloch February 19 2012, 06:25:09 UTC
:) Won't be long! Not with Steve or Danny's temper.

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simplyn2deep February 19 2012, 05:12:44 UTC
One of the women live in the gang area...that should be very interesting. You would think that they would want to protect her since they probably view her as "one of them"...so maybe the killing was the protection? Hmmm

I don't know why I didn't make the Bobbit connection. Usually I notice stuff like that.

I think I've made my opinions of Jackson and Harris known lol

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gotulloch February 19 2012, 06:26:44 UTC
Maybe? I couldn't help the connection. Soon as I wrote down the placement of the 2nd stab wound the name Bobbit popped in my head!

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sherry57 February 19 2012, 10:56:33 UTC
And our guys continue to show partnership and great understanding of each other. Jackson doesn't understand Steve's reaction to Danny because although he's very arrogant, he doesn't have the laid back self confidecnce that our boy has. It will be interesting if he actually gets to witness some of the duo's diffeent type of interrogation style!
And I look forward to witnessing Steve and Danny deal with him!!

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gotulloch February 19 2012, 21:40:27 UTC
I like that, laid back self confidence. Steve definitely does, he also has that Hawaiian attitude I think. Jackson doesn't understand partnership at all, never did. My uncle would say that some are born to be leaders, managers and others aren't and should be kept away from that type of authority! LOL My uncle was a smart man.

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