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gracheness

My Friend, The Fence.

Jan 13, 2005 14:17

Title: My Friend, The Fence (1/2)
Author: gracheness
Fandom: Original fiction.
Pairing: If you look hard enough I guess there's subtext.
Rating: G
Summary: Charlene's best friend is a fence named Francine. This is a story of their friendship and the challenges they face because of it. Yes, this is a serious story. There is character development and slight ( Read more... )

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warrior_cat January 13 2005, 03:35:11 UTC

My God, Georgie... This is really good! I can't believe you turned such a silly, one-dimensional idea into something so fantastic. Great plot and everything! Wow!

I can't decide whether Charlene is crazy or not, but that's the fun. ^_~

Looking forward to part two!

gracheness January 13 2005, 03:51:34 UTC

*Giggles* Thank you. I was hoping that Francine came off as a character, and not a static fence. I hope I acheived that. ^_^ Thanks for reading such a crazy idea, d00d.

Charlene's sanity is open to interpretation. She originally started off as gullible. Open to interpretation...

Part two up soon! It's almost finished.

warrior_cat January 13 2005, 03:56:58 UTC

You did very well with Francine! And the whole fences/trees backstory -whoa!

Okay then. *nods*

XD Excellent! I await it with baited breath.
Are you going to send this off somewhere to get published? ^_^ I'm not very good at writing short stories, but you seem to have a knack for it.

gracheness January 13 2005, 04:00:52 UTC

Published. WTF? Seriously? Where? It's like 2,100 words long. *is intrigued like woah* Are there magazines that print crap like this?

Short stories are what I do best! But I've never attempted the complexity of a novel. All hail The Great Soph0rz. I've been reading charcoal_shadow (the really old ones).

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andy_star January 13 2005, 07:24:31 UTC

Wow ;) What a strange thing. :P It's really cool, however you did (as far as I can tell) accidently get Francine and Charlene mixed up.

When Francine returned that day, should probably be Charlene returning,
Francine much preferred to sit inside with her family and drink soup should probably be Charlene and
just how normal Francine and her family should probably be Charlene also.

Apart from that, the whole thing made perfect sense! XP

gracheness January 13 2005, 08:51:35 UTC

Wow, thank you. I was 100% sure I'd gone wrong somewhere. Thank you for pointing that out *edits* ^_^ <3

harrietwalker January 13 2005, 21:46:42 UTC

wow ... i wish i could come up with interesting ideas like that ...

lovely story :)

gracheness January 14 2005, 05:50:21 UTC

Haha, thank you.

Dad said it was 'influenced' by Lord of the Rings. What does he know.

harrietwalker January 14 2005, 19:19:13 UTC

well obviously lotr was full of talking fences ... lol

i think fantasy fiction helps the imagination develop. in fact, i think all fiction helps the imagination. even tv. because it helps you think about things that you know aren't real, and you imagine the possibilities of what could happen ...

(this is just a random argument against people who believe that tv destroys imagination)

buffy_kitten January 14 2005, 14:35:07 UTC

Wow ... you've managed to make me feel sorry for a fence. That's really ... amazing. God. *stares*

gracheness January 14 2005, 15:05:20 UTC

Score! *Is so proud* I was trying to make it so Francine didn't come off as a static fence, but a real character! Yes!!!! *dances*

Thank you so much for reading. I'm surprised anyone did! *dances around happily*

buffy_kitten January 16 2005, 10:44:47 UTC

Oh, I'm happy I made you proud. But it was REALLY good. *joins in the dancing!!*

You're welcome! Keeeeeeep writing, please! I've read all the english books I brought here, and reading stuff keeps me sane. SANE!!!!