Fic: Off the Stage (9/14)

[gradgirl_07]

Title: Off the Stage (9/14)
Author: gradgirl (aka Ali)
Rating: PG-13 (soon NC-17)
Characters/Pairings: Van Hansis/Eric Sheffer Stevens
Summary: Future fic. What happens off the stage when Van and Eric meet again?
Warnings: RPS. If you are offended by the idea, please do not read this story.
Disclaimer: Complete fabrication, never happened, never expect

Comments

[hopperl]

At first I freaked that you cut into a HOT makeout session for "flashbacks". However, when it ended w/ the couch scene I thought it was perfect. When they first sat on the couch in Van's apartment that was the scene I thought of. Most of the free world has a crush on Van, so of course Eric does. This I do believe is more than a crush. Really can't wait for the next chapter to see how it all plays out.

[gradgirl_07]

I'm glad I was able to stop the freak out. :-) The couch scene is one of my favs. and I'm always reminded of it when I look at your icon. Glad you're looking forward to more. Thank you. ~Ali

[smoothlikebutta]

I loved this chapter! That couch scene on the show is one of my favorites--I liked the easy domesticity of it and the foot touch.

It was just pretend but it was all he had.

Awww! I am glad Eric made the first move and Van finally got a real couch scene. They still need to talk though. I look forward to more.

[gradgirl_07]

Thank you! I loved the couch scene as well, for the reason you said. I think Van couldn't have made the first move and they will talk... ~Ali

[casaluna85]

Is it Sunday yet? Heee :D
Great chapter!

[gradgirl_07]

Thank you! Soon, I promise. ~Ali

[tuckatangent]

I really enjoyed this chapter. They're so comfortable with each other, and I'm glad Eric finally made his move. But me being me, I wonder if Van will overthink and worry about Eric's past with Jenny, since he doesn't know about Christopher. The makeout scene was lovely, just what I wanted.

[gradgirl_07]

Thank you. I liked what you said about them being comfortable with each other. Van will have some questions we'll see more of his reaction to all of this in the next chapter. Glad you liked the makeout scene. ~Ali

[expletory]

this chapter is beautiful. thank you for writing it, I'm looking forward to the rest of the story.

[gradgirl_07]

Thank you! I'm so glad you liked this chapter. ~Ali