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gradgirl_07

Fic: Off the Stage (12/14)

Mar 25, 2011 07:25

Title: Off the Stage (12/14)
Author: gradgirl (aka Ali)
Rating: NC-17
( Chapter Twelve )

Comments 40

hopperl March 25 2011, 17:54:47 UTC

Like everything else you write, I loved every bit of this chapter. I saved your update for last and read it twice before I felt my brain was even able to function well enough to comment. I loved the Van/Jake & Eric/Teri intereaction ( ... )

gradgirl_07 March 25 2011, 20:43:07 UTC

Oh, thank you so very much. The Van/Jake and Terri/Eric stuff was probably written for cherimola and I'm glad you liked it. The guys are pretty intense, aren't they? I liked what you said, they can't seem to get enough of each other that's for sure. And thank you for what you said about the NC-17 stuff. We might see more. No plans for an extension at the moment, but I'm glad you're enjoying the ride. ~Ali

smoothlikebutta March 25 2011, 17:55:38 UTC

I really liked the convo between Van and Jake. Jake is a good, protective friend.

I love that they already consider themselves as boyfriends. The scene at the apartment was so hot and tender at the same time.

I can't believe there are only 2 chapters left--it feels like things are just beginning.

gradgirl_07 March 25 2011, 20:44:32 UTC

Glad you liked the convo between Van and Jake. He does want to protect his friend. Thank you for what you said about the apartment scene. Yes, we're almost at the end, but we'll see what the guys have in mind for the next two chapters. Thank you. ~Ali

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gradgirl_07 March 26 2011, 12:19:13 UTC

Thank you. Van was very understanding, b/c he didn't want to push Eric, but it was right for Eric, right? Glad you liked Terri. ~Ali

cherimola March 26 2011, 00:00:00 UTC

FYI, I haven't stopped squealing yet either. Perhaps ESS needs to come and check on me.

And sighhh, thank you again for all the reminders of how this is a dream come true for Van. (and how the reality of present!Eric is even better...)

gradgirl_07 March 26 2011, 12:19:55 UTC

Thank bb. You know the dreams were probably added for you. ~Ali

traciamc March 26 2011, 00:12:55 UTC

I don't know how it happened, but I missed your last update, so I had to read 2 chapters. Suffice to say, I'm really surprised I can speak/write/type ANY coherent sentences. This turned me into goo - seriously. The tenderness, the hotness (I have NO idea why you're nervous about writing NC-17 - it was amazing). Everything about these 2 chapters was soooo good. Not even good, better than good! I'm just...there are no words.

Wow.

gradgirl_07 March 26 2011, 12:21:17 UTC

Oh, wow thank you. I appreciate what you said about the NC-17 parts and that you're kind of speechless. ~Ali