Fic: Off the Stage (13a/14)

Mar 27, 2011 07:39

Title: Off the Stage (13/14)
Author: gradgirl (aka Ali)
Rating: NC-17

Due to posting size cut into 2 parts.

Chapter 13a )

eric/van; fic: off the stage

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ltklo March 27 2011, 13:36:19 UTC
Ah, love!

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gradgirl_07 March 27 2011, 14:16:07 UTC
Thank you. They're crazy about each other, yes.

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sleeper6 March 27 2011, 15:18:52 UTC
Oh, wow, I knew it'd be like this--it was perfect, truly. The love, care, lust, and trust between them is amazing. I'm so glad they declared their love for each other too.

Wonderful!

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gradgirl_07 March 27 2011, 18:21:58 UTC
Oh, thank you so much. I'm glad you enjoyed this part. ~Ali

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cherimola March 27 2011, 18:13:32 UTC
You know, the two moments I find myself reliving most are Eric's going into the bedroom -- because, though he wants to run, he'd never do that to Van again, but he still has to get away -- and Van's saying he's the guy who's in love with him.

Well, that and the transformative sex, of course. ;)

Especially this: It was the most intense moment of Van’s life, seeing the love and trust in Eric’s eyes, knowing no one had ever made love to Eric but him.

*hands you a black-eyed Susan*

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gradgirl_07 March 27 2011, 18:22:40 UTC
Thank you (for everything, of course). Eric couldn't do that to Van, no, and I'm glad you liked Van's declaration. ~Ali

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pabwecg March 27 2011, 19:44:29 UTC
It was the most intense moment of Van’s life, seeing the love and trust in Eric’s eyes, knowing no one had ever made love to Eric but him.
I think Jenny might disagree with him ;)

Lovely chapter, Ali. Love the I love you's! And Eric's nervousness alongside his desire was so nicely done.

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gradgirl_07 March 27 2011, 20:57:15 UTC
I think Jenny might disagree with him ;) I was thinking the only man who had made love to Eric. I'm glad you enjoyed this chapter. ~Ali

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gradgirl_07 March 27 2011, 20:37:01 UTC
Thank you! ~Ali

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bluemagicrose March 27 2011, 19:43:52 UTC
Um, wow.

That's all I got right now. Brain isn't functioning too well at the moment. :D

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gradgirl_07 March 27 2011, 20:37:12 UTC
Oh, gosh, thank you so much. :-) ~Ali

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