Oh, wow, I knew it'd be like this--it was perfect, truly. The love, care, lust, and trust between them is amazing. I'm so glad they declared their love for each other too.
You know, the two moments I find myself reliving most are Eric's going into the bedroom -- because, though he wants to run, he'd never do that to Van again, but he still has to get away -- and Van's saying he's the guy who's in love with him.
Well, that and the transformative sex, of course. ;)
Especially this: It was the most intense moment of Van’s life, seeing the love and trust in Eric’s eyes, knowing no one had ever made love to Eric but him.
It was the most intense moment of Van’s life, seeing the love and trust in Eric’s eyes, knowing no one had ever made love to Eric but him. I think Jenny might disagree with him ;)
Lovely chapter, Ali. Love the I love you's! And Eric's nervousness alongside his desire was so nicely done.
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Wonderful!
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Well, that and the transformative sex, of course. ;)
Especially this: It was the most intense moment of Van’s life, seeing the love and trust in Eric’s eyes, knowing no one had ever made love to Eric but him.
*hands you a black-eyed Susan*
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I think Jenny might disagree with him ;)
Lovely chapter, Ali. Love the I love you's! And Eric's nervousness alongside his desire was so nicely done.
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That's all I got right now. Brain isn't functioning too well at the moment. :D
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