Fic: Neither Rhyme Nor Reason (3/9)

[gradgirl_07]

Title: Neither Rhyme Nor Reason (3/9)
Author: gradgirl (aka Ali)
Rating: PG-13
Characters/Pairings: Luke/Reid eventually
Summary: When it comes to love, neither rhyme nor reason need apply.
Warnings: Based upon this prompt.
Author’s Notes: Written for a prompt by gypsieheart. Hope you enjoy it. And a huge thank you to cherimola for beta work and listening to my whining.

Comments

[hopperl]

Just like every other chapter you have ever written I loved this one! Truly though I really found this chapter to be important and frustrating. I think it is hilarious they are both jealous of Katie and thinks each other is jealous of them with Katie. LOL
I am really intrigued by the VERY BRIEF mention of Luke's kidney, drinking, cause, etc. I believe there was also in Chapter 1 maybe a very brief mention of Kevin.
I love how you write these two, and how they each pull each other off their game in a major way, but it is beyond their human control. I am really sure that Luke knows and has always known, but maybe it isn't until Reid that he realizes he can't control things any longer and frankly really doesn't want to. I mean, who wouldn't want to give into Reid in every way imagineable. Can't wait to see Bob's reaction when it all blows up. LOL Can't wait till Wednesday.

[gradgirl_07]

Thank you so much! I'm afraid that you will most likely continue to find these chapters important and frustrating. Glad you liked the jealousy of Katie. ;-) We'll touch on more of the Kevin and drinking issues. I'm so glad you liked the way I wrote them. I think you've gotten into Luke's head on this one. Hope to hear from you again on Wednesday. ~Ali

[gradgirl_07]

Oh, gosh thank you! I believe the tension will continue to build... ~Ali

[ganeshalemming]

He didn’t want anyone to hold Luke back.

I really like that. Reid wants to push and for Luke to push back.

It's cool how you manage to have them both be jealous of Katie.

Luke and Reid don't know what's going on, and neither do I. This is fascinating. :)

[gradgirl_07]

Thank you! Reid definitely wants to feel the push from Luke. I'm glad that you liked them both jealous of Katie. ;-) They're both confused, that's for sure. I'm glad you're enjoying this story. ~Ali

[tldreamer]

Am enjoying your story. Can't wait to read the next chapter!

[gradgirl_07]

Thank you! I'll have the next chapter up on Wednesday. ~Ali

[nanaloralee]

Another great chapter. Thier arguing is just forplay!! Luke is feeling the attraction but doesn't know what to think about it. I can't wait for the next update.

[gradgirl_07]

Thank you! Sorry I didn't respond sooner. I think their arguing is definitely foreplay. ;-) Thank you! ~Ali