Fic: Neither Rhyme Nor Reason (8/9)

[gradgirl_07]

Title: Neither Rhyme Nor Reason (8/9)
Author: gradgirl (aka Ali)
Rating: NC-17
Characters/Pairings: Luke/Reid
Summary: When it comes to love, neither rhyme nor reason need apply.
Warnings: Based upon this prompt.
Author’s Notes: Written for a prompt by gypsieheart. Hope you enjoy it. And a huge thank you to cherimola for beta work and comma help. Comments are

Comments

[tldreamer]

Great chapter! Loved Luke's hesitation and Reid's being gentle and patient with him. And Katie as comic relief was a hoot!

[gradgirl_07]

Thank you. I kind of added Katie at the last minute, but I'm glad you liked it. ~Ali

[alissablue]

Oh, bb, you really have nothing to worry about when it comes to writing NC-17. This was fantastic. ;)

Luke's conversation with his parents was so wonderfully done and I especially loved Holden's reaction and how he's so supportive of Luke. And I cracked up when Lily mentioned Noah. Oh, Lily. XD

Also, I adored that conversation on the phone, in the dark, with Luke falling asleep like that<3. So sweet.

Beautiful chapter, as always<3.

P.S. I can't believe there's only one chapter left! :'(

[gradgirl_07]

Thank you, bb. I really appreciate what you said about the convo between Luke, Holden, & Lily. Yes, Lily, still keeping that hope alive... The scene in the dark on the phone was my fav, I'm glad you liked it. I'm sad to see this one end too, but I appreciate all of you taking the journey with me. Thank you. ~Ali

[snowmore]

Ali, the mutual masturbation and kissing is perfect! They have to be slow. Luke isn't the guy to jump in with both feet once he finds his true self, and all the patience and keenness Reid shows gives Luke more food for thought - he's found the right man.

They're hot together. You handle these intimate moments very well!

[gradgirl_07]

Thank you, Robin. I liked what you said about Luke, b/c I do want to keep that essence of him in here. And if it's hot, it's all them. ~Ali