Fic: I knew it when I held you

[graecus_hist]

Title: I knew it when I held you
Prompt: holding hands
Pairing: Zayn/Louis
Rating: R
Word Count: 2300
Warnings: angst, swearing, drinking.

Summary: In the morning, Louis spills out of the door and Zayn feels the bed rise with the missing weight of Louis pressed up against him, but he stays in bed for as long as he can, hangs on the frail whim of Louis

Comments

[rinnoa]

I like the angsty stuff in it - how Louis seems capable of living without Zayn but Zayn - not without Louis. I really love that part of their relationship (I love to see this in all relationships in fiction, so, um, ok?)

Also, upon rereading this now, it feels a lot like an MGMT song from "Oracural Spectacular" - somehow fragmented, and idk, a lot like an indie movie. (Or - it's very likely - I'm finally high from all the medication I've taken today). Anyways, it's definitely a plus! I adore this.

So yeah, amazing job <3

[graecus_hist]

Wow! The thing you said about it feeling like an MGMT song is such a massive compliment! (idk what to say, but you made it sound special and somewhat illusory and stunning and i am definitely not sure if i deserved that)

You know how I feel about angsty-zouis, really. It's the genre I want to keep writing for the rest of my life.

Thank you so much, love!<3