Fic: If this is your first time at fight club, you have to fight.

Nov 13, 2012 01:27


Title:  If this is  your first time at fight club, you have to fight.
Prompt: Play Fighting
Pairing: Louis/Zayn
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 2K
Warnings: none.

Summary: They're too old for this. Probably. Not really.

This was written for 1directionelite.

No teeth. Zayn'd think that would be a given, but Louis brings it up amiable, well-played, and Zayn tries to bite back the laugh, pushes Louis off and sinks his own teeth on the scattily exposed skin of his neck instead.. )

1directionelite, one direction, pairing: louis/zayn, type: fic

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omgitskatharine November 13 2012, 22:09:35 UTC
oh my god i loved this. soo many good lines:

-"Louis hisses and tries to kick him off, pushes him back, twist against him, but Zayn's hold on him is mad strong and Louis wonders how is it that this is even possible when all Zayn does is lay around all day, all the time." yessss
-"They're just a few new bruises, but they feel alive, existing and prompting and he doesn't mind it. " YESSS
-"But it's just theirs, and people question it, and they love not having to answer to it; because it's just theirs. And it confuses people." - oh my god yes yes yes

i'm sorry that i've been reduced to saying "yes" in vaguely different tones but this was fab and I can't express myself in a better way right now ha. wonderful work :)

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graecus_hist November 15 2012, 14:26:16 UTC
wow, thank you so much! this is an amazing review and I appreciate it so much :)

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rinnoa November 14 2012, 21:28:12 UTC
This is rediculously good. And omgitskatharine is right - so many good lines.
I love your non-Zouis work but you have to remember that it's your Zouis fics that had me hookes with the band in the first place. If this doesn't explain how I feel towards this fic, too, I don't know what does :P

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graecus_hist November 15 2012, 14:27:04 UTC
heee! thank you so much, love!

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