Fic: But I thought, this wouldn't hurt a lot.

Nov 20, 2012 00:56


Title: But I thought, this wouldn't hurt a lot. (I guess not)
Prompt: reunited
Pairing: Zayn/Louis
Rating: R
Word Count: 2k
Warnings: swearing, drug use.

Summary: There's an undeniable stretch of years they've missed of each other dwelling between them; Louis and Zayn reunite.  The south street bar swerves into a corner, there’s cheap beer, tats, and ( Read more... )

1directionelite, one direction, pairing: louis/zayn, type: fic

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graecus_hist November 21 2012, 16:44:34 UTC
thank you<3

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rinnoa November 20 2012, 22:05:49 UTC
This was really beautiful. I almost broke into tears at some parts.

I love how it has a sense of realism to it. Because, you know, when you haven't been with someone you cherish/love for such a long time, at first, seeing them is very painful. They have changed, you have changed. You feel as if you might not fit again. And it's hurtful because at first, it seems that the other person might have not missed you as much while they were the world to you.

Really, really beautifully done.

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graecus_hist November 21 2012, 16:48:30 UTC
wow, thank you so much, love!

I am so humbled by your comment about it having a sense of realism; I always feel like I can relate to Zayn but when you put it like that I feel glad to have been able to transfer the feelings through the words.

thank you<3

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omgitskatharine November 21 2012, 21:04:35 UTC
i could blather on and on about how much i loved this but i'll just get to the point: as much as it pains me to say this, between your fics and rinnoa's fics, i'm quickly becoming a zouis shipper. lol. lovely as usual.

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graecus_hist November 22 2012, 17:39:56 UTC
yes! I am obviously too happy about this :D zouis is such a beautiful ship- their dynamic is just so interesting and I always say this but I love how subtle and delicate it seems and yes it just makes me happy. Also, rinnoa does such an amazing job at characterising these two, and I always love how she writes Louis!

Thank you so much, love!

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rinnoa December 25 2012, 15:11:18 UTC
Sorry to butt in, but thank you :) To the both of you!

Also, Em is amazing and she is the reason why Zouis was my first ship and that's how I got into the fandom. <3

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solangemonique November 22 2012, 05:59:09 UTC
I seriously love all of your writing. Absolutely all of it. I want to be specific and say exactly what it is I love about it but I can't it's just perfect and amazing. And I don't want you to ever stop because your writing brings joy to my life. I just love your Zayn/Louis dynamic. You always get them right and I love that.

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graecus_hist November 22 2012, 17:42:20 UTC
wowwowow thank you so so much! You have no idea how much I appreciate this lovely, lovely, review. you're the sweetest<3 I am glad you think I get them right, that makes me very very happy, yes.

Thanks a lot, love!

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