One Piece | Fanfiction: Emphasis

[grammartrap]

Ace wrinkled his nose in mild distaste, in part from the cigar fumes emanating from the ashtray not a few feet away from him, and of course as the recipient of the all too troublesome death-glare and scowl amalgam.

"And you talk too much, brat," Smoker replied in kind, taking a long draft from his cigars. He stole a glance at the pirate only to find

Comments

[popkin16]

*giggle* I love how Smoker/Ace always goes right into innuendos and/or porn. XD

I think your portrayal of how the two interact is wonderful ♥

[grammartrap]

Thank you very much! Dialogue has never really been my strong suit, so I'm happy to hear that this attempt fit well with you!

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[popkin16]

You're welcome! You did great :)

[empererpenguin]

Inuendo does not make somethng nc17 ths is pg13 at most, change the rating.

[grammartrap]

Thanks for the input! Although I respect your opinion, I am afraid that I will not be changing the rating from NC-17 to PG13. As far as I am concerned, sexual material of any kind in a story, no matter how subtle it may be, should not be exposed to the younger aged populace.

We must agree to disagree here, I think! Aside from the rating, did anything else in the story happen to come across as irksome? Your opinion is always appreciated.

[empererpenguin]

Then you should mention in the header what you consider nc17. No nothing else bothered me but the rating is misleading.

[grammartrap]

I'll make sure to do so in this and future stories. Thanks for the suggestion.

[fingerbleed]

Cute! <3 The rating was a tad misleading, but I appreciate you rating up as apposed to down. I've seen some scary things classified as PG-13 or even G! I always say that if I can't read it out loud to my little brother, it isn't appropriate. XD

This fic really put a smile on my face. It just seemed like something they'd really do. XD I'll be looking out for more of your fics, definitely!