One Piece | Fanfiction: Hourglass

[grammartrap]

Title: Hourglass
Author: Grammartrap
Genre: Angst
Word Count: 275
Pairing: Smoker/Ace

Summary: Ace had once commented that a person’s eyes could tell a great deal about one's feelings, he wonders now if he was right in laughing at him.

Author's Note: This chapter contains spoilers for the events that unfurl after the Thriller Bark Ark

Comments

-sniffles-

[oskalaboska]

that was sad, but in a good way. -runs to go find some fluff-

Re: -sniffles-

[grammartrap]

Sad was what I was aiming for in this particular piece, so I'm glad you found it so. Thanks for reading!

And yes, I know the feeling. ;-; I had to think of something fluffy to write after this.

[vio55]

Oh. Oh God.

I think I love you. *_*

I love thissss. I knew I was going to love it when I read the first sentence. Great way to bring a reader in, definitely.

And I loved how you portrayed Smoker's thoughts, and how he was torn between wanting to just have Ace killed already because it's justice and then not wanting to watch.

...Thank you for sharing! 8D

[grammartrap]

Thank you very much! I tried to get out of my comfort zone for this story. I'm glad it went over well with you.

[arcielfreeder]

Aww... Sad... T.T

It's very beautiful.

[grammartrap]

Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it.

[arcielfreeder]

Hehehe! Hope you'll write more! I love your writing style and your icon's cute! *o*

[eternallove_495]

I guess that... if you love someone, I don't know- It'll just take his suffering as something that has to do with his feelings for Ace-, then I'm sure you'll feel hell too, knowing that your counterpart, or lack-there-of, is closing to his death and you know you can't do anything either.