first off. adsfjkl; the length. omg. congrats julia ♥ secondly, your warning. omfg, you weren't lying at all. COPIOUS AMOUNTS OF DEATH!!! third. o t fucking three :'> that's enough to have me right there.
i like how things kind of come full circle in this fic. like, it starts with jiho winning the tournament and trying to bring back kyung; it ends with kyung winning and trying to bring back jaehyo (and subsequently jiho, but that's another thought for later). i really, really enjoy how - despite jiho already participating in the tournament beforehand and knowing most of what may happen - he doesn't expect certain instances or outcomes, such as the identity of the sixth being not hanhae but taeil... and also meeting jaehyo. C: OBVIOUSLY I AM VERY HAPPY THAT HE LISTENED TO KYUNG AND WENT INTO THAT CAFE :'3 it's kyung who brought ot3 together; i will stand by this fact and be very pleased about it :'3
and the way things progressed. i'm still rather upset that taeil killed jihoon :( i hope it was painless, ok.
Sob. You. Sobsobsob. Thank you. Yes, ODG, I decided it best to include a warning after what we discussed two nights ago, ahahaha. (I still find it funny how I ended up writing your OT3 without knowing it at first!)
Oh, I'm happy you noticed/liked that. It was completely intentional, and I can't remember if I told this to you before or not, but I wrote the beginning scene and ending scene first because of those intentions. it's kyung who brought ot3 together; i will stand by this fact and be very pleased about it :'3YOU WOULD. PFFFT
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PROBLEM? WHAT PROBLEM? I think that sounds like a good idea. Block B can never have enough love. JaeCoKyung can never have enough love too. :D Come to the BBC side, Katie. Come to us~
I am glad the denouement pleased you. It took me a long time to fully decide how I wanted this plot to go, haha, but I always knew how I wanted it to end. If that makes sense. /catches plushies and snuggles into them
I CANNOT WRITE SMUT SO UM YES PLEASE ALLOW YOUR IMAGINATION TO RUN WILD WITH THAT ONE ;;;;;;;
I don't think you understood how I shrieked when I first noticed your "spotting" on my fic. /CRIES AT YOU Also, I'm also proud of the fact that BBCs get to read this. And rejoice we get not only long fic but also good fic. HUSH. HALT YOUR KIND WORDS. CEAAASE
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my friends have been asking me to watch mirai nikki/future diary for ages now, and I never actually tried. but this kinda boosted my curiosity. I really enjoyed reading this haha it's good. and poor jaehyo ;___;
I haven't actually watched the anime; I've only read the manga... But I'm going to assume they're similar and say it's a pretty good series. The set up for everything's great, and the premise itself is fascinating (hence why I ended up writing this, haha). The female lead is completely insane though, LOL, and it's a little off-putting sometimes.
I'm glad you thought this was good! Thank you so much for reading and commenting. ;~~~;
OKAY. SO HI. I’M FOREVER LATE WITH EVERYTHING IN THIS WORLD BUT HAI. ;A;
He ignores the ground that is literally crumbling beneath his feet as he starts screaming towards the sky. His breathing is ragged when he finishes shouting for a god that no longer wishes to communicate with him.
The world, for Jiho, ends on a Friday afternoon. I’ve already told you that I absolutely love this line. It ties in wonderfully with the title, and it’s like this one sentence that just makes you stop. It just encompassed the whole result of everything that had happened to Jiho beforehand, and it’s just heartbreaking really.
And Jiho took over in place of Woo Jiho.I love how you just pointed out what had happened with this one line, revealing everything, yet at the same time, not revealing enough. I love the difference between the two Jihos, based on the fact that you had used his surname, which, in my opinion, makes him seem so much more normal that Jiho; as if he is just ‘normal school kid Woo Jiho, who has a family, and a best friend, and leads a
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“Same to you guys.” Taeil waves farewell as the pair leave the store. “I hope you win your ‘hide and seek’ game.” When the door closes shut, he adds, “I’d like to challenge you guys to a game too.” When I had first read this, I had just thought that Taeil was really innocent in wanting to join in on the ‘fun’/their game, and that he was just weird, but now, seeing as I’ve already read this, I just can’t help but think; OH MY GOSH. TAEIL. THIS IS FORESHADOWING, I THINK; WELL IT IS TO ME AND OH MY GOSH THIS IS FLAWLESS AND OH MY HEART ;A; TEARS. TEARSSSSSS. TAEIL. YOU ARE SO MUCH MORE EVIL THAN YOU HAD INITIALLY HAD LET ON AND SOB.
A question he now knows the answer to. DID NO ONE EVER TELL YOU, WOO JIHO, THAT IT ISN’T GOOD TO HIDE THE TRUTH AND TO KEEP SECRETS FROM YOUR BEST FRIEND?!
“Hello, I’m Kim Yukwon. I’m Minhyuk’s best friend, and I also really like dancing.”U-BOMB. U-BOMB. U-BOMB. U-BOMB. U-BOMB. U-BOMB. U-BOMB. U-BOMB. U-BOMB. U-BOMB. U-BOMB. U-BOMB. U-BOMB. U-BOMB. U-BOMB. U-BOMB. U-BOMB. U-BOMB. U-BOMB. U-BOMB. U-BOMB. U-
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You know when something is so confusing because it’s written badly, and you can’t make sense of anything, not because you’re not reading deep enough into it, or because it’s supposed to be a cliffhanger, but because there is really not enough to base anything on; and it’s written so terribly, that it’s confusing and there’s not enough written to make you understand?
This fic is nothing like that.
I really do love this fic, Julia ^^ It’s really well written and sfdljkkljkjldslkjsd. Instead, this fic is so well written, and the plot is confusing, and I love it. But when I read over it again, I got hit with this realisation, and everything managed to slot itself together, and everything just fit and made sense, and that’s what makes this fic amazing. (Basically, you write well and make me cry, ahahhaa
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I don't deserve your love. /gross sobbing You are abusing such lovely compliments by throwing them my way. Eep. But I'm really grateful you weren't put off by your confusion towards this fic, and I'm also grateful that you gave this fic a chance (since I know you were eyeing it warily due to its rating). You're too good to me. Thank you so much for your ridiculously kind comments.
It’s even more sad for Jiho, because he needs to keep doing this. He’s gone through it more times that Kyung has, and I guess it must really be tiring, this continuous need to have to start his life over, because things have never really gone to plan. It’s as if Kyung and Jiho are just caught in this endless cycle of heartbreak.I think you're the only one who's pointed out the possibility of there not being a happy ending their third time around. Not gonna comment much else on that. The ending is certainly open to interpretation. (Except that, look at you! Stringing together beautiful sentences again in your attempt to read into the characters! Heheh
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i like how things kind of come full circle in this fic. like, it starts with jiho winning the tournament and trying to bring back kyung; it ends with kyung winning and trying to bring back jaehyo (and subsequently jiho, but that's another thought for later). i really, really enjoy how - despite jiho already participating in the tournament beforehand and knowing most of what may happen - he doesn't expect certain instances or outcomes, such as the identity of the sixth being not hanhae but taeil... and also meeting jaehyo. C: OBVIOUSLY I AM VERY HAPPY THAT HE LISTENED TO KYUNG AND WENT INTO THAT CAFE :'3 it's kyung who brought ot3 together; i will stand by this fact and be very pleased about it :'3
and the way things progressed. i'm still rather upset that taeil killed jihoon :( i hope it was painless, ok.
cries ot3 had sex. ( ... )
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Yes, ODG, I decided it best to include a warning after what we discussed two nights ago, ahahaha. (I still find it funny how I ended up writing your OT3 without knowing it at first!)
Oh, I'm happy you noticed/liked that. It was completely intentional, and I can't remember if I told this to you before or not, but I wrote the beginning scene and ending scene first because of those intentions.
it's kyung who brought ot3 together; i will stand by this fact and be very pleased about it :'3YOU WOULD. PFFFT ( ... )
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Come to the BBC side, Katie. Come to us~
I am glad the denouement pleased you. It took me a long time to fully decide how I wanted this plot to go, haha, but I always knew how I wanted it to end. If that makes sense. /catches plushies and snuggles into them
I CANNOT WRITE SMUT SO UM YES PLEASE ALLOW YOUR IMAGINATION TO RUN WILD WITH THAT ONE ;;;;;;;
(You are too kind to me dear, ily. ♥♥♥)
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Also, I'm also proud of the fact that BBCs get to read this. And rejoice we get not only long fic but also good fic. HUSH. HALT YOUR KIND WORDS. CEAAASE ( ... )
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and poor jaehyo ;___;
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I'm glad you thought this was good! Thank you so much for reading and commenting. ;~~~;
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He ignores the ground that is literally crumbling beneath his feet as he starts screaming towards the sky. His breathing is ragged when he finishes shouting for a god that no longer wishes to communicate with him.
The world, for Jiho, ends on a Friday afternoon.
I’ve already told you that I absolutely love this line. It ties in wonderfully with the title, and it’s like this one sentence that just makes you stop. It just encompassed the whole result of everything that had happened to Jiho beforehand, and it’s just heartbreaking really.
And Jiho took over in place of Woo Jiho.I love how you just pointed out what had happened with this one line, revealing everything, yet at the same time, not revealing enough. I love the difference between the two Jihos, based on the fact that you had used his surname, which, in my opinion, makes him seem so much more normal that Jiho; as if he is just ‘normal school kid Woo Jiho, who has a family, and a best friend, and leads a ( ... )
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When I had first read this, I had just thought that Taeil was really innocent in wanting to join in on the ‘fun’/their game, and that he was just weird, but now, seeing as I’ve already read this, I just can’t help but think; OH MY GOSH. TAEIL. THIS IS FORESHADOWING, I THINK; WELL IT IS TO ME AND OH MY GOSH THIS IS FLAWLESS AND OH MY HEART ;A; TEARS. TEARSSSSSS. TAEIL. YOU ARE SO MUCH MORE EVIL THAN YOU HAD INITIALLY HAD LET ON AND SOB.
A question he now knows the answer to.
DID NO ONE EVER TELL YOU, WOO JIHO, THAT IT ISN’T GOOD TO HIDE THE TRUTH AND TO KEEP SECRETS FROM YOUR BEST FRIEND?!
“Hello, I’m Kim Yukwon. I’m Minhyuk’s best friend, and I also really like dancing.”U-BOMB. U-BOMB. U-BOMB. U-BOMB. U-BOMB. U-BOMB. U-BOMB. U-BOMB. U-BOMB. U-BOMB. U-BOMB. U-BOMB. U-BOMB. U-BOMB. U-BOMB. U-BOMB. U-BOMB. U-BOMB. U-BOMB. U-BOMB. U-BOMB. U- ( ... )
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This fic is nothing like that.
I really do love this fic, Julia ^^ It’s really well written and sfdljkkljkjldslkjsd. Instead, this fic is so well written, and the plot is confusing, and I love it. But when I read over it again, I got hit with this realisation, and everything managed to slot itself together, and everything just fit and made sense, and that’s what makes this fic amazing. (Basically, you write well and make me cry, ahahhaa ( ... )
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You are abusing such lovely compliments by throwing them my way. Eep. But I'm really grateful you weren't put off by your confusion towards this fic, and I'm also grateful that you gave this fic a chance (since I know you were eyeing it warily due to its rating). You're too good to me. Thank you so much for your ridiculously kind comments.
It’s even more sad for Jiho, because he needs to keep doing this. He’s gone through it more times that Kyung has, and I guess it must really be tiring, this continuous need to have to start his life over, because things have never really gone to plan. It’s as if Kyung and Jiho are just caught in this endless cycle of heartbreak.I think you're the only one who's pointed out the possibility of there not being a happy ending their third time around. Not gonna comment much else on that. The ending is certainly open to interpretation. (Except that, look at you! Stringing together beautiful sentences again in your attempt to read into the characters! Heheh ( ... )
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