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New Fic: Keepin Up Appearances

Jul 08, 2008 17:21

Title: Keepin Up Appearances: Chapter 1

Author: Isabelle (sophieernie)

Rating: R now, but will be NC-17 eventually

Disclaimer: Not mine, no profit, all hail AP, LM, DO, etc.

Genre: AU -- Circa 1980.

AN: I am not sure if this premise has been written, but I have been around since the dawn of this pairing and I don’t remember this exact one. I ( Read more... )

keepin up appearances, nc-17, au/au

Comments 40

shieldmaid1 July 8 2008, 23:34:27 UTC

Wow, this is really brilliant. I like the idea a lot, and you write very well. Would really like to see where this goes, so I hope your muse is kind to you. :)

sweetje July 9 2008, 00:13:26 UTC

Oh, please continue this story. I love it already!
I would love to see how Jack and Ennis get together in this.
Thank you for the new story. I'm looking forward to your next chapter. : )
Debra

Keeping up Appearances ennis4me July 9 2008, 00:13:54 UTC

I love it!! Very interesting take and I do hope you write a lot more....

Of course, only Jack could get Ennis to talk more because their souls are destined to be together.

Keep going!!!! Adrianne

Keepin Up Appearances Chapter 1 bmshirts July 9 2008, 00:23:15 UTC

Interesting start. I hope Jack can get his 'itch' scratched by Ennis and not have to go looking for it elsewhere.
Thanks. Carole

bbmjack324 July 9 2008, 00:33:45 UTC

Really good start. I'm interested to see what happens next. Escpecially liked these lines:

Looks like some god damn movie star. What was the name a that movie?...

“I heard you used to ride bulls. What you doing now?” Damn, ain’t never this talkative....

... so the itch was getting bad again. Lookin was always more dangerous than having a steady on the side. Wasn’t the first time Jack cursed his own bad luck, nothing made the urges go away.