Drabble (x2): Touch

[grapesmugglers]

my  first drabble, for drabble-fest over @ BBM_drabbles (crossposted).  Give me your thoughts

Would go several months without the touch of another human being. No one regarding him enough to shake his hand, just barked orders at him. Didn’t fight no more, too old, the young ones might actually win this time. Months upon months with only his own

Comments

[sweetje]

The last line made me really sad. It just breaks my heart to know that Ennis will never see, much less touch, Jack again.
Another good one. Thank you. : )
Debra

[jacks_key]

Excellent.

[snowtonight]

oh my god, that was so good.

[torry28]

The saddest thought he won't feel Jacks touch anymore. Ennis sounds so broken so empty and alone.
You did a very fine job showing his feelings.
Thank you
Torry

[eandj]

sad but good
thanks
Paula