Drabble (x3): Sundays Ain't for Sinners

Aug 24, 2008 15:27

 I guess drabbles are like potato chips (or glasses of wine)!

Title:  Sundays Ain't for Sinners 
Author:  Isabelle
Word Count: 300
Warning:  cursing, religious issues, reference to m/m sex
Brought to you by the letter S and the day Sunday

Fucking hated Sundays, made him feel like a sinner. Would sit in church the few times Alma forced him to go and, like ( Read more... )

sundays ain't for sinners, drabble

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sweetje August 24 2008, 20:48:01 UTC
Nay, they won't go to Hell together. They'll go to their Heaven up on Brokeback Mountain.
Intersting one. Thank you. : )
Debra

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jacks_key August 25 2008, 01:06:05 UTC
Ennis knows - repression of one's feelings only makes things worse, for everyone involved.

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snowtonight August 25 2008, 01:13:50 UTC
Oh Ennis, you're approaching this all wrong! Do what I do and concentrate on those lovely images of you and Jack together when you're somewhere boring. Trust me, it makes time fly.

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torry28 August 25 2008, 02:10:15 UTC
Jesus preached love he never said who you could or couldn't love.
No Ennis you will be together with Jack in a good place, you both been to hell and back many times over.
Thank you for another very good piece of writing.
Torry

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gothica_vanessa August 25 2008, 19:51:49 UTC
like the devil was messing with him, couldn’t stop thinking of Jack -> LOL

Had to regret your sins to be saved. Ain’t no way in hell he could repent for Jack.
-> that bit is gorgeous :)
Seeing those eyes full of sadness was hell enough on earth for Ennis.
-> that broke my heart :(

Way Alma and the preacher saw it, Ennis was for sure going to hell. Told himself, at least if he went to hell, Jack’d be there with him.
-> ennis love is love, told you that already my dear ... so you two for sure don't belong in hell :)

very nice one
vanessa

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