Design Input for Safety Banner

[studiorayn]

This is a Cheeky Safety Banner I am working on. I am trying to make it the best it can be. What do you think I could do to improve it? The slogan was given to me and the style is similar to the Catalog (bw photography/red) and the site is https://zinkcalls.com/. I appreciate your input. Thanks!!

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Comments

[jainas]

I think you should rework a bit the text flow; right now, its hard to read the whole message in one go because the two parts of the text are too far apart, and the eye doesn't make the jump from "turkey" to "and", to the punchline.

[studiorayn]

Yes, That is what someone else said as well. Thank You!