NARUTO: Split, Prologue

[greatcloudninja]

Split
Prologue

“Dude, this party is awesome!” a brunet yelled across the room, clutching a cup of rum and Coke in his right hand. He swayed slightly as he tried to cross the room, picking his way through a throng of people blocking his path. The red triangular tattoos on his cheeks were almost completely overpowered by his drunken flush. Inuzuka

Comments

[kaze_gaara]

Great start, methinks. :)

It read really smoothly with a good start on characterization. I can't wait to see more of this one! I'll definately be on the lookout for a continuation.

hi

[anonymous]

I agree with kaze_gaara i like how you didn't just jump into the fray of things, hope the rest of the story will have the same flow ^_^ thanks for sharing

[ok_go5]

Awesome~~

Adfgkjhgajkh jesus christ is naruto ok?!