Comments | green_drake: Yay for dirty poems!

green_drake

Yay for dirty poems!

Feb 03, 2006 21:07

So, we had a poem reading in english today, and i hadnt prepared anything, but i had a pie, and i was in a mood, so i quickly wrote this in like, 2 minutes:

Pie, thy deliciousness fills my mind ( Read more... )

pie

Comments 12

unsurelyknowing February 4 2006, 05:21:53 UTC

its so bad, yet so good! How do you do it! BTW the pie was mighty tasty, thanks!

crazypizzamonk February 4 2006, 05:57:35 UTC

Mmmm, eating pussy, I mean pie... Yes, pie, right.

green_drake February 4 2006, 07:16:00 UTC

Glad you got it katie, i knew You would hahah

crazypizzamonk February 4 2006, 07:42:36 UTC

Well, aside from the fact that it's flamingly obvious what you're talking about, Erin told me about it at lunch today.

green_drake February 4 2006, 08:00:14 UTC

haha, awsome :D

And yes, it is flamingly obviouse, but it also isnt straight-out, and therefore, i figure it was school appropriate

thawa February 4 2006, 06:28:48 UTC

*must not think dirty thoughts* *must not think dirty thoughts*...oh what the hell *think dirty thoughts...*

green_drake February 4 2006, 07:16:38 UTC

Haha sarah is thinking dirty! :P Whats Possably dirty about my poem? i ahev No clue!

malandy1589 February 17 2006, 04:19:10 UTC

CUM INTO THE OFFICE OF MY VAGINA, RAYNER. (tee hee)

green_drake February 17 2006, 08:14:44 UTC

that was very disturbing and WRONG!!!! !Ugghhhh! But my poem still kicks ASS!

anonymous April 18 2006, 04:34:44 UTC

That was amazing.
With a mind like mine it reads like porn.
Although knowing you it may have been intentional.

I didn't read the other comments. anonymous April 18 2006, 04:36:04 UTC

That comment obove this one was Laura, by the way. As is this.
Just to let you know.

green_drake April 19 2006, 02:31:40 UTC

yeah, well, you see...it can be read as either porn, or as a simple, innocent poem about pie! im thinking about trying to get it put in our school yearly story/poem book :P