Seven Days /// Sunday: How to break a heart

Apr 01, 2010 02:08

Jin hated how he had lacked sleep for the whole week.

First the night he had spent at the river with Kazuya, just lying there and watching the stars. Then the night they had spent in the rain and from then on, he hadn’t slept well one single night.

He usually wasn’t like that and usually, he wouldn’t spend second thoughts on the person he was dating ( Read more... )

multichap: seven days, akame

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ryo_dokkun April 1 2010, 02:25:06 UTC
no~~ kame is a meanie..his words strike straight to the heart!! this chap is a heart breaker..

thanks for the update~~

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yumiko_okahawa April 2 2010, 09:24:39 UTC
It seems Kazuya's not as honest as we thought... about Jin, at least. I am sorry for the heartbreaking words v.v

Thanks a lot for reading! ^^

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secretparanoia April 1 2010, 02:33:22 UTC
I've been following your fics and they're just . . . Amazing > w <
I loved this chapter. The whole flow of emotions were so strong
You made me cry. ; w ;
I totally thought that you were gonna make Jin hold Kazuya back and they'd become official o w o ;;
I really loved this chapter. Thanks for posting it up and please update soon n _ n

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yumiko_okahawa April 2 2010, 09:25:55 UTC
Oh~ Thank you! ^^ I am happy you decided to leave a comment, that's nice! ^.^
I am sorry for making you cry, though! Doooon'!~~

I would have loved to make them official, but there's going to be a reason for why they can't ... Next update is coming soon ^.^

Thanks so very much!!

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lost_sky6 April 1 2010, 02:36:31 UTC
Awww poor Jin!! The beginning was so sweet then it all turned around...why?? =(
Kame better have good explanation next chapter XDD
Hope you update soon~!

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yumiko_okahawa April 2 2010, 09:27:17 UTC
Thanks so much for reading!
I am sorry for Jin, too.. everything changed in just a moment. But, of course, there will be more to it next chapter :)

Thank you!

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Seven Days /// Sunday: How to break a heart agustin1982 April 1 2010, 02:39:32 UTC
*blank expression* whaaaaaaat!! Where akame loveeeee!!! I want akame love, please update soooon!! Kiss~

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Re: Seven Days /// Sunday: How to break a heart yumiko_okahawa April 2 2010, 09:27:58 UTC
*laugh* Akame love's gone, somehow... I am sorry for that! ^^;
But it'll surely come back at some point!

Thanks a lot for reading! ^^

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akameonly April 1 2010, 02:41:32 UTC
*huggles* thank you for before.

This was somehow so straightforward yet sensually and undeniably soft, sweet, concise, and just pure.....*sighhhhh*
And yet the line kazuya drew from being so sensual and loving to being the biyotch we all know he can be (although the reason is very much understandable) was drawn so boldly and quickly that I had to take a step back.

I can't wait for kazus explanation and exactly how Jin is gonna throw this right back at him...

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yumiko_okahawa April 2 2010, 09:30:14 UTC
*hugs back* You are welcome. i hope you're feeling better; at least a bit!

I wanted it to happen that quickly, so that it would be difficult to even progress what was happening, and for Jin to be more painful. It's the end of the day, of Sunday, it's the time the deal ends.
But, of course, that's not going to be over here, there's some more to it ;)

Thanks so very much for reading and I hope you'll like the next one, as well ^^

<33

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