Seven Days /// Tomorrow: If it's that easy (FINAL)

Apr 05, 2010 21:12

It had taken the whole night, but when Jin came to school the next day, he was sure that what he felt towards Kazuya was bare disgust.

Probably even hate.

He hadn’t slept at all and usually, after nights like the one he had gone through, Jin wouldn’t even think about going to school. Instead, he would sleep long, catch up on all the sleep he had ( Read more... )

multichap: seven days, akame

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insalia April 5 2010, 23:16:35 UTC
Well, you probably broke the heart of every reader as well as Kazuya's and Jin's!
It was a really sad but great ending.

I hoped that Kazuya wouldn't be an idiot too scared and will try to be with Jin. I was ready to kick his a** and remind him that this whole mess was because of him. He shouldn't have ask Jin if it was for breaking my heart XD
If they can't be together in 7 days, I'll wait for a sequel called... I don't know... 77 years? :)

Thanks for this awesome story <3

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yumiko_okahawa April 7 2010, 06:14:56 UTC
I am sorry for breaking your heart >___< really~

He shouldn't ahve, probably, but in the end, I think he probably already knew he'd fallen for Jin when he asked him out~ However, he did and the consequences of that game, that's never really been one, are pretty painful on them now. Poor boys.

Okay, I am sure meeting again they will be much stronger to handle their love... and then probably stay together for 77 years :)

Thanks so very much for reading and commenting, I am very happy you liked this! <3

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akameonly April 5 2010, 23:31:17 UTC
Finally I know ur name!

Oh and shai...the ending was both fulfilling and empty in more ways than one..of u get wut I mean...

I just hope the hint that I got is right...pleaseeeee be right!!!!!!!!!

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yumiko_okahawa April 7 2010, 06:17:01 UTC
*laugh* Ah, you could have just asked or looked at my personal journal,.. Shaina, Shai... you can call me one of those, whatever you like :)

I do get what you mean. It's just the ending of this multichap, though. Because the seven days are over. Thsi doesn't mean their story is completely over, it can still continue. And it definitely will :)

*snuggles*
Thanks so very much for staying with me until the end once again and for always commenting~~
Thank you!

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kristen_erika April 5 2010, 23:40:07 UTC
_jin did his part, didn't he? he practically begged kazuya to come back. but because everything but their love is wrong, they couldn't stay with each other. no matter how they both wanted it.

no matter how sane and logical this beautiful story has ended, this is certainly one of the times i would have wanted a happy ending for both of them. oh well, they are still happy. just not in that way. -__-
but they both will be right? happy in THAT way. *that's if i'm getting the hint here XD*

thanks again for spending your time writing these well-loved stories. and thank god your an akame writer. XD

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yumiko_okahawa April 7 2010, 06:22:42 UTC
He practically did, right. And thus, he will be a lot more carfeul in the future, if you get what I mean ;) Kazuya won't have it too easy ( ... )

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kristen_erika April 7 2010, 07:26:17 UTC
_wow, you already have THAT planned out. i can't help but feel so excited, dammit. XD

thinking about it now, you actually did that. i mean, they were very happy and everything just seemed to go their way. i haven't noticed that. not until you mentioned it. so much for being a fan of your stories. XD

as for me, i'd wait forever for a happy ending for akame. XD

i think it's better this way. it would *usually* feel very dragging if the story just goes way out of the plot the writer intended to work around with.

did i actually say that before? god, i'm sorry i forgot. i tend to just type down whatever i think about and however i feel about the story after reading it. it helps me make more genuine comments. i didn't realize i said that to you already. X(

i don't think i'll ever get tired of reading akame from you. please do keep writing more&more&more akame. ^_^

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yumiko_okahawa April 7 2010, 21:13:44 UTC
Haha, yes, and for so long, as well~ XD

Ah, no, you couldn't see taht coming. i mean... i myself didn't even see it coming XD So, well, it just happened. And if I had decided to extend this, it would have been a happy ending for sure.
But I thought "Seven Days" should really be seven days long.

You did, but I am not upset about that or something. You can say it as often as you like, since it's praising words. They just... well, really touch me, somehow and I am very grateful for them... I had a few experiences in this fandom of being not good enough as a writer, so reading an "thanks for writing akame" makes me feel like I somehow probably have a right to write for them, after all, so I am really happy :)
Thanks a lot for giving me that kind of courage, it's something i can't thank you enough for !!!

Thanks so much, really ♥♥♥♥♥

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Seven Days /// Tomorrow: If it's that easy (FINAL) agustin1982 April 5 2010, 23:49:06 UTC
Yadda,,,*passed out*

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Re: Seven Days /// Tomorrow: If it's that easy (FINAL) yumiko_okahawa April 7 2010, 06:24:21 UTC
O____O
*helps you up*
Please, please don't! Things will be alright.. it's just the end of this multichapter, but their story will continue in another one, for sure!!!

Thank you for taking your time to read, even though you didn't like it >__< I will amke sure to come up with something better soon again!! <3

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lanheart April 5 2010, 23:53:53 UTC
although i understand why you end it like this, well..it is a realistic ending, but still i'd prefer they'd end up together. Will you make, i don't know, epilogue later on? Maybe like some years later they'll meet again and start all over again, please??

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yumiko_okahawa April 7 2010, 06:26:49 UTC
*smile* Thanks a lot for reading until the end!

And yes, just as I wrote... they are too young now to handle all that. leave them a few years, and then they will be stronger. I'll amke sure to let all of you know how they are going to do then, when they'll meet again some years later~
I've just wanted the multichap to really just revolve around those seven days, so I decided to finish it at this point.
Their story will continue, though~ ^^

Thanks so very much for taking your time to read and for always leaving me comments!! <3

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