Make You Mine /// Sixteenth Lie: Too Close

[green_feelings]

Title: Make You Mine
Pairing: Akanishi Jin x Kazuya Kamenashi //Akame//
Genre: Romance, AU
Rating: PG-13 and up.
Disclaimer: I don't own any of the characters in this story. I don't make profit with this.
Summary: The first impression counts and Kazuya's first impression of Jin is not the best. However, Jin is determined to get to know Kazuya - and

Comments

[cnidaria_jin]

Thank you for this update, made my dayyyy but oh no i hope they'll still be together ;_____________;

♥

[yumiko_okahawa]

Thank you for reading, I am happy if you enjoyed it so much! Thanks for always stopping by to read and comment! ♥♥♥

[keeaneegan]

ok now, jin wanted to let kame go?
who is behind this accident???
it wasn't ueda, right?

[yumiko_okahawa]

Apparently, Jin thinks Kazuya is better off without him.
And yes, it seems like it isn't Ueda, after all.

Thanks a lot for reading and commenting, I am very happy if you enjoyed it ♥

[souleater_angel]

Wasn't expecting you to update so quickly! This was a very pleasant surprise. ^^

Boo great more angst in the future I see, but I'm glad Natsuki is okay and listened to Kazuya, and of course that Kazuya will be okay too.

Update soon?

[yumiko_okahawa]

Yes, from here on, angst is building... they have a lot of hardship ahead of them.
And for Jin, seeing Kazuya and natsuki are okay, is most important.

Thanks a lot for reading and commenting ♥ I am very happy if you like it!
Thank you so much!! :)

[kame_bemu]

I have a feeling I'd need a handkerchief next time.Hope things brighten up for the couple.Poor Natsuki.Glad kazuya thoguht fast or else she would be harmed ,too.I'm still gonna stick out to my original choice of who the culprit is.Instead of breaking up with KazuyaI hope Jin would be man enough to finish off his troubles.

[yumiko_okahawa]

You probably would. Did you? *lol*
As of now, things don't seem too bright for them, but that might change... and Jin won't change his mind too fast and perhaps, his reasons aren't that bad, either.

Well, I am looking forward to find out who you are suspecting ;)

Thanks a lot for reading and commenting, I am very happy if you liked it ♥

[tayarisa]

OMG I'm dying in here!!!! Who is doing all this?!?!?!? And after all that Ueda had said at the end he didn't really knew anything!!!!
Poor Natsuki was so afraid but I'm really happy Kazuya managed to save her.
NOOOOOOOOOOO!!!! I'm don't want Jin to leave him. They have been thought that before and it didn't worked, they just can't be without each other!!!!

This is a great update with a good cliffhanging (not so good for my nerve since you have managed to make me a slave of this fic)
I really love this fic so far and I know I'll keep loving it.
Even though you just make two updates I can't wait for the next.

[yumiko_okahawa]

No, eventually, Ueda doesn't know much, actually. he just wanted Kazuya to turn away from Jin. Everyone in this story has their secrets and lies...

Yeah, Jin would have never gotten over it, if anything had happened to Natsuki. But, he probably won't ever get over what happened to Kazuya, either.
So... he might not stop his thoughts anytime soon.

Thank you so much. I am really just so happy you enjoy this fic so much and want to continue reading it!
Thank you so, so very much ♥