Hands of Time /// Akame /// Drabble

[green_feelings]

Title: Hands of Time
Pairing: Akame
Rating: G
Warning: This deals with reality (i.e. Jin's marriage!). Angst.
Disclaimer: I don't own any of the characters and won't make any profit out of this.
Summary: Things had been different, when they had still been together.

A/N: For gina84, because I owe her for recognising my writing in this year's kizuna_exchange. And as a late

Comments

[pochnaden]

I imagined this so well.

And made my heart ache and still, I felt like the 'It's better like this' is really better. *sighs*

Thank you! :3

[yumiko_okahawa]

I am afraid it really is better... But, I think they realised it and realised that still, what they share is somehow special.

Thanks a lot for reading and commenting ♥♥♥

[candle_lies]

I like this :)
Even though they aren't together anymore, it still feels like they are, and the regrets kame have makes it seem even more bittersweet. I felt sorry for him :(

I seriously like the way you write though. simple but beautiful phrases. Wish I could write half as well as you :) thanks for sharing!

[yumiko_okahawa]

Thank you!
Kame does have regrets, but I think he also understands that those regrets make no sense...

Thank you so much! I am happy you enjoy the way I write ♥ However, I am very sure that you write just as well - everyone has their own style and that makes everyone's writing different. It's difficult to compare, I think.

Thanks a lot for dropping by once again ♥♥♥

[danz8aoi]

U know what,, I tried so hard not to mutter f**k. XD XD XD >>meanwhile I'm still fasting. LOL.
And tried so hard not to cry. OMG OMG..
when I read the part when Jin said "It's better like this."
It's hard not to say bad word for him. LOL LOL LOL LOL.

OK OK OK. it's really depressing but beautifully written. Yumiko-chan, u know somehow, you always succeed in making me cry hard. XD

Thanks for this ah-maziiing fic.

[yumiko_okahawa]

Haha, I am glad you didn't break your fasting just because of this and swallowed that "f*ck" ;)

I didn't mean to make anyone cry, though. I thought, even if it was a little bitter, it still gave off a rather positive vibe, but reading all the comments, I might be wrong XD

Thank you so much ♥ I am really very happy you enjoyed this the way I wrote it! Thanks so very much for taking your time to read and comment!

Thank you ♥♥♥

[sky1102]

You made me cry T______T
Kame T_____T

Anyways, thanks for this update.

[ak_daisuki]

i`ve just read this.. how much kazuya's feelung towards jin...
angst but beautifull like always..
^^