Comments | green_kiwigirl: Drabble... ish. Thing.

green_kiwigirl

Drabble... ish. Thing.

May 18, 2006 20:51

I wrote a little R/Hr drabble-ish thing (I think a drabble is supposed to be 100 words or less) on the subway back from school, and decided that I may as well post it. I can be something of a perfectionist and I will obsess over this tiny little piece and stress over its revision, unless I stop myself now and just do it. So, the writing's just ( Read more... )

drabble, fic, r/hr

Comments 16

browneydweasley May 19 2006, 02:06:56 UTC

Sweet! Absolutely precious. Good work!

green_kiwigirl May 19 2006, 02:47:31 UTC

Thank you! :D

ragdoll May 19 2006, 02:38:28 UTC

Aw, sweet. A lovely little moment between them. I love it! :)

green_kiwigirl May 19 2006, 02:48:32 UTC

Well, it would be if Ron was conscious, lol.

Thanks so much, glad you liked it. :)

ragdoll May 19 2006, 02:58:34 UTC

Ah, it's still between them since he's in the room, even if he's out cold. I thought it was really nice. :)

snorkackcatcher May 19 2006, 11:47:07 UTC

A bit sappy, but in a good way. :)

green_kiwigirl May 20 2006, 16:37:55 UTC

LOL, :D

sixxynutter May 19 2006, 11:57:34 UTC

Awww. It's really so sweet. I like it!

green_kiwigirl May 20 2006, 16:39:33 UTC

Thank you, glad to hear it. Lately, everything's fluff, fluff, fluff for me! :D

ex_cutekeepe118 May 19 2006, 12:14:15 UTC

!!!

I LOVE IT! Such sweetness and a nice moment of relief for both of them. Hermione's mind goes a million miles an hour, and it's clear to see that she needed this little breather (and seriously, I would be doing some HEAVY breathing watching Ron sleep. 8D) as much as Ron did.

green_kiwigirl May 20 2006, 16:43:57 UTC

Eee! You liked it? Yay!

Thanks very much; I'm glad you saw it as a relieving moment for the two of them, that's what I was aiming for.

And, you definitely aren't the only one who'd be panting like a dog. My crush on Ron has escalated so much now, it's kind of sad. :D