not as good as it should be, but I like this one -

[greenergrassier]

Forms Gave Way to

Comments

[greenergrassier]

so, uhhh...anyone wanna give me props for 'gerunding'?

(cuz eye beeleave it's neato!)

[ihatejournalism]

I'll admit-- I don't really use verbs in poems, just gerunds. . . so yeah. Good job.

[anything_but_ok]

smoke. it flows in gentle curls. i like it.