The Time Has Come (ch.2)

[greeneyes0911]

Title:The Time Has Come

Comments

[houselover87]

I really like this and I hope u write more. And I'd love to read ur books. I love pirate types.

[ashmanda]

:D this is great! i love the idea of Hatter and Alice taking in a troubled teen (which a lot of parents say is the worst part for them) so its like...getting in some early practice!

this is wonderful and i would love to see more :)

[greeneyes0911]

The third chapter is up love! Go have a read.

[klcthebookworm]

“It's gotten itself into another fickle pickle,” Hater cut her off glaring at Duchess as though this were her fault. The woman should take better care of her family. “So we'll have to be off to save it.” -- I love this expression from Hatter.

And the Duchess has taken over cockblocking the Hatter from Jack. I'm wincing in sympathy; I really am.

I like Savy and I think it's a good thing she's already met Charlie. :D

[greeneyes0911]

Hehe I actually came up with that myself! I was so proud. I was writing another fic with Hatter and wanted to say they were a pickle, but I was like uh that doesn't like Hatter. So I added the fickle, I made my own day. Yes yes poor Hatter doesn't get any ass when the Hearts are around. And if Savy hadn't met Charlie already I think she'd pee herself laughing at the mere sight of him.

[greeneyes0911]

Well that is what I was aiming for! So pleased it worked.

[yourstar202]

Woot! Back to Wonderland!! Savy should be absolutely priceless in the next chapter! *Hurries off to read*