*attempts to be helpful*lytabentenAugust 6 2005, 06:53:51 UTC
You could do something with the clock. Have Fiyero looking at it and it pops something out to mock him. And then Elphaba finds him clambering on it and attacking the figures/face.
It was mostly supposed to be sort of prophetic I think. It personified the devil to Elphaba's father (drawing a blank on the name right now). But it did have that bit where the townsfolk were being ridiculed by it.
Maybe it could go through the ranks? Make fun of Elphaba for being green, Glinda for wearing so much pink, etc. And then they all start attacking it. Or something witty.
That's the best I can come up with at 3am, sorry. ^_^; Maybe if I sleep on it I could be more helpful.
Personally I would like to see some Fiyero love...oh, maybe it would be funny if you did something involving the epic hate wars between Idina and Kristen...or something.
How about something with the Nessa-Boq-Galinda triangle? You could have Nessa gloating to Galinda and Elphaba about how happy she is and how Boq is so thoughtful and does everything for her without being asked. Then you could have Fiyero and Boq talking and Fiyero could say something like "whoa...she actually makes you *insert disgusting/embarassing yet not too icky to scare of readers personal hygine issue here*" Something like...clipping toenails or doing the "here comes the choo-choo, open up the tunnel" thing when he feeds her. (I'm going for the armless Nessa here, lol). Wow, long comment...hope it helps!
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[/vague] Sorry, it's late. LOL. But it's a suggestion nonetheless!
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Maybe it could go through the ranks? Make fun of Elphaba for being green, Glinda for wearing so much pink, etc. And then they all start attacking it. Or something witty.
That's the best I can come up with at 3am, sorry. ^_^; Maybe if I sleep on it I could be more helpful.
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epic hate wars though? :o What's the story behind that?
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panel 1: elphaba mooing to the moon.
panel 2: glinda coming in and stopping her.
panel 3: glinda tells her, "wrong musical, honey."
sorry, i'm no good with comics. :D i just like reading them. :D
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