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[greensidhe]

Eve laughing kicked
hysterical
through oceans
through puddles
threading the rain
through her hair
through her fingers
a glorious
exclaimation
of everything
beautiful

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[catwingz]

*claps her hands, giddy with delight*

YES

[greensidhe]

*warm smile*

[caintheexile]

Sorry to offend you. I didn't mean to come across like a spammer.

I posted where I posted because that community had listed seduction as one of it's interests and I'm trying to get as much input as I can so I can develop the idea I mentioned.

I'm not selling anything - really. I don't have a product, or an axe to grind. My only agenda is that I feel this is a major breakthrough.

Either way, no offence. I didn't mean to intrude.

Ever Yours

Jekyll

[caintheexile]

Also, I'm not sure if this qualifies, but here's a piece of writing that might be closer to what you're looking for. I'm writing this for you to say sorry. Hope you like it

[caintheexile]

Oh, come on - that was brilliant!